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Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 22 Sep 2015 9:38 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    This made me smile, after it brought tears to my eyes. Enjoyed the part where Severus was flying. Well done.

    --his
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 08 Aug 2010 6:55 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I can almost hear little Sev's laughter! He's really adorable. I like the way you portrayed Madam Hooch, also. Well done!

    Author's Response: Yes, Madam Hooch is a cool character to change a bit. :)
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 06 Sep 2009 9:35 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice chapters. I like how happy little Sevvy is and I can't wait to see him grow up. I'm a bit worried that he'll have a really hard time when the other students come in, but hopefully Harry will cure that.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    The students won't come in this story. It will appear in the second sequel. The first sequel will be about Alastor's birthday because it was a birthday present for a friend. So it is a bit confusing but I will explain it when I upload it!

    Thank you for your review! 

Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 06 Sep 2009 6:39 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    this story is really cute, sunny, as always. you always write such cute stories :P. Little Sev is adorable.

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it! Thank you for your review! 
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 05 Sep 2009 11:31 pm
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very Cute. I think that he deserves a do over like Harry deserves one.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 04 Sep 2009 10:50 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this story. Upload as fast as you can :•) mila

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! The next update will come soon.
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 04 Sep 2009 6:10 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes, Please! This is great!

    Author's Response: I'm very glad that some people like. Thank you very much for your review! The next update will come soon.
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 04 Sep 2009 3:48 am
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoy your take on the other members of the Hogwarts staff, particularly the ones who get little face time in the books, like like Poppy, Sprout, and Hooch. The flying with "Harlie" and Ro was such fun to read about!

    Seeing Severus adjust to a different homelife from what he remembers of the first time he was 4 made me sad. What really got me teary eyed, however, was when they tried to explain to him that he was actually a grown man who had been deaged a few days before, and that some people might be mean to him!!! Poor little Sev!!!

    I am looking forward to Harry coming soon!!!

    Author's Response: Still one long chapter without Harry and then I will start uploading my normal short chapters. I'm very glad about your detailed review. I was so scared to upload this story here because I feared flames about that Harry isn't there from the begining. So reviews like yours let me feell much better! Thank you!"
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 04 Sep 2009 1:28 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    PLEASE up load more. I'm loving this little guy.

    I fear the treatment from the students--will Harry have to step in and be a protector? I can't imagine Harry letting anybody hurt this little guy.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    This story will end when the school year beginns, so there are no interactions with the students, but there will come a sequel about Alastor's birthday and then another one which will start when the students come back.

    I'm very glad that some people like. Thank you very much for your review! The next update will come soon.

Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 03 Sep 2009 9:59 pm
Reviewer: llpi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please continue uploading!

    Author's Response:

    If still people are intersted, I will of course upload. I'm a bit unsure about this because the long foreplay before Harry appears. I already wrote a sequel in which Harry will be from the beginning and that was the only reason I dared to upload this story. Otherwise reading the sequel would do no sense.

    I'm very glad you are interested and let me know.


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