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Title: Chapter 3 - New friends (13-16) 22 Sep 2015 10:18 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    I am loving this fic. Naptime with Alaster was great.

    Hermione to the rescue! That was really good.

    --his
Title: Chapter 3 - New friends (13-16) 08 Aug 2010 8:09 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    You portray little Severus with all his uncertainties and way of seeing the world very well.

    Great chapter. ^^

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Title: Chapter 3 - New friends (13-16) 06 Sep 2009 11:35 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Still enjoying this! I just hope Ron accepts Severus. I'm a bit worried about that, though I imagine Hermione's given him a talking to about it already. This is so adorable--please don't stop writing!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: No, Ron won't be a big problem this time. :) Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 - New friends (13-16) 06 Sep 2009 3:20 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, sounded like Charlie&Hermi romance. I always thought Ron was too immature for Hermione... I like this fic! M.

    Author's Response: Yes, you are right! :) Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 - New friends (13-16) 06 Sep 2009 12:24 am
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    All the insecurities of an abused boy come out in Sev, don't they? Of course, he would be concerned about other children not wanting him around, or kicking him. The toilet monster must seem very real to him if his father assured him it was so. I like how everyone (well, except Peeves!) is trying very hard to see Sev the four year old, not Snape the foul tempered potions master. But even Snape had his friends too - Minerva's grief does need to be acknowledged and dealt with, for sure.

    But for our little tyke, can't wait to see Sev at the Weasleys!!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 - New friends (13-16) 05 Sep 2009 9:40 pm
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    definitely still interested-especially in what role harry will play

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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