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Reviews For A Better Childhood
I liked this, please continue posting as I want to see where this goes :) Nice work! Author's Response: Of course I will continue posting! Thank you very much for your review!
Great beginning! The chocolate stains all over the t-shirt were very good! As was the toilet monster. It's interesting that you've got Alastor in there too - that's quite original. :) You said that he would get his quarters back again I think - does that mean he only has to be temporarily returned to child-hood or is Dumbledore planning on keeping them until he is 37 again? Which seems quite weird if he no longer wanted to teach potions, although I could see the wish of the adults to do so because of keeping something of the adult Snape's. Kind of like after someone has died. Author's Response: No, he won't get aged back. Severus just has to live a new life. His quarters will be sealed for him to open them when he finally realized that he already had a life before and wishes to see his belongings. The quarters are not sealed for him to live in there but because of Severus' things. The adults want to give him the opertunity to get them on day again. Thank you very much for your review! |
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