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Title: Chapter 10 - Big Friend (23) 14 Sep 2009 8:38 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    See harry doesn't want to be an adult, I really like the way harry is with Sev. Can't wait for next post.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you like it. Many people are annoyed with my moody HArry. :) But a war is changing people.

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 10 - Big Friend (23) 14 Sep 2009 3:09 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a nice Chapter. I liked Charlie!

    Author's Response:

    I like the Charlie in my story as well. :) Therefore I added him in a few of my other stories as Severus helper or deputy. But they are no Harry/Severus stories and only up on fanfiction(dot)net.

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 9- Hagrid’s Hut (22) 14 Sep 2009 2:50 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Hurray for Pookah!

    Author's Response: :) Thank you!
Title: Chapter 10 - Big Friend (23) 13 Sep 2009 9:01 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    guessing he went to the green house

    Author's Response: You mean Harry? Oh, he is a complicated young man, so you will find out were he went in the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 10 - Big Friend (23) 13 Sep 2009 7:55 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus! I can't believe Charlie didn't realize what he said! Good grief!

    Update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 9- Hagrid’s Hut (22) 13 Sep 2009 12:08 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    sevvy's a trouble maker... and you said in this chapter that "harry giggled 'that tickles!'". I believe you meant Severus giggled?

    Author's Response: Thanks for telling me about the mistake. And thanks for your review as well!
Title: Chapter 9- Hagrid’s Hut (22) 12 Sep 2009 11:12 pm
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like Pookah he is cute. I think that Harry has healed also. I wonder if turning him back into a child might help him.

    Author's Response: A Harry will have ups and downs, and next chapter already will be a down. De-aging wouldn't help him in my eyes because Harry is strong enough to heal as an adult. He just needs the right help. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 9- Hagrid’s Hut (22) 12 Sep 2009 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for Pookah surviving! I can just picture his little weasel head peeking out of the top of Sev's shirt! Cute!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 9- Hagrid’s Hut (22) 12 Sep 2009 8:46 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    :)yay he's all better!

    Author's Response:
    Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 8 - Help for Pookah (21) 12 Sep 2009 5:27 am
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    Little Sev had such a tiring day! I trust Hagrid to pull Pookah through... it would be too bad if Sev lost his little friend! I enjoyed how Charlie and Harry were getting stressed thinking about all of the witches who would be on them mercilessly if Sev was hurt while he was out with them. You may be the Chosen One, but that doesn't help when you get Poppy mad!

    Author's Response: :D Thank you very much for your review!

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