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Reviews For Just a father
Author's Response: Ivy-green, Actually I do agree with you, he would be rather useful. Even as a grouch, he still seems to talk sense and he too is rather lonely. Hahaha! Yeah, kinda like Snape! Pleased to hear it and thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: ObsessiveaboutSnape, Heh, glad to hear it! Thank-you and don't worry...I will! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Monica, Ha, ironically I just submitted it not a few minutes ago :P -Mel :)
This is such a good story! I thoroughly enjoy it! The ending bit there with the Room of Emptiness was AWESOME! Such a cool idea! And poor Snape being there too. This was an interesting, and clever way to have Harry learn about him and his mother. Very cool! Who knows, that could even help their relationship in the future, now that Severus agreed! Author's Response: Raven Knight, Haha, thanks. I really liked that line too, had to put it in. Wow, thanks heaps for those wicked comments, they certainly made my day. Glad you like the room of emptiness idea and yeah, Snape had spent a rather large amount of time there, ironic that it's located near the Gryffindor common room portrait too :P. Snape has agreed (although still coming in terms with it) and there was certainly a reason why I invented the room of emptiness. Thanks for your review!! Will update later today. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Justjoanjm, Hehe. Yeah, and if Snape were to meet the Dursleys etc, I do believe that will be an interesting scene for by the time he'd have the chance to do such thing he would have been in his fathering role for almost a year...something to consider. Thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Crystal cove, Thanks, I apreciate the comments. And I will, lol...soon indeed. -Mel :)
Have seen this little mistake in Farring's speech: "it just make take him some time". May take, right? Good chappie again. Loved the dialogue between H and S! *You will respect any decisions I make involving you for I will only have your overall interests in mind?* *I will sir* Harry sighed. *I don't believe you* Snape said honestly. *GG* *This is to remain between us* Snape added. *I do not think it would be a wise move for this news to spread* Why, I'd like to see the rukus Weasly tweens would arrange! THAT would be a day! Deep touch about seeng desperation in Harry's eyes. Snape remembered himself in this age, eh? ) Don't believe they know where exactly this aragement will lead, though desperate they are both. Big yay to them and hope Hogwarts will survive!) Liked the way you described their insecurities. Portrait is nice idea - Castle is taking care about her children? Best wishes! Author's Response: Wyrsa, Wow, thanks for the review! And yes, I do believe that was meant to be "may take". Will fix it up when I can get around to it, thanks for pointing it out. Hehe, yeah. I am unsure how to reply to each of your comments but thank-you very much for them. Though yes, the castle is taking care of ther children, hense the room :P. There is actually a backstory to that room as well but that is for a later date. Again, thanks for your review and thanks! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Hacklebolt, Hense why I invented it, :P Thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Jessirose85, Thank-you and I'm glad to know. -Mel :)
Quite impressed also with the quick updates, and on two stories too. Wish "I" could write that fast. Author's Response: Pandora, Heh thanks and I'm really happy to hear those comments. I'm flattered. And yes, it's a talent I myself admire. Thanks again. -Mel :) |
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