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Reviews For Just a father
Title: Reluctance 08 Sep 2009 8:47 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story, Harry wanted something and asked for it. And Snape said YES! Can't wait to see the relationship build.

    Author's Response:

    Missny1,

    Indeed he did and thanks. Haha, Snape did give his reluctant "yes". The relationship building is the part I am most looking forward to writing, well I have written some but I mean for further on down the line.

    -Mel :)

Title: Reluctance 08 Sep 2009 8:42 am
Reviewer: DoC Brown (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice and smooth. Even if the plot devices are somewhat cheesy.

    Author's Response:

    DoC brown,

    Nonetheless, thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Reluctance 08 Sep 2009 6:39 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting premise. Good job so far.

    Author's Response:

    JolisGSD,

    Thank-you, happy to hear it.

    -Mel :)

Title: Reluctance 08 Sep 2009 6:05 am
Reviewer: Astrid (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the new chapter!
    Wow! The power of Harry's eyes.I wonder what would be the extent of a father's role that Severus would be willing to take.

    Author's Response:

    Astrid,

    Happ to hear it. Thanks and yes, those eyes how powers indeed, unfortunately for Snape! He's not too sure himself but it convinced that he won't really be able to be a father to Harry so he's keeping it basic for now: helping with studies etc...but he'll learn ;).

    -Mel :)

Title: Reluctance 08 Sep 2009 4:24 am
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome!! I love how this story is going. Thanks for the quick update.

    Author's Response:

    Starbuck1332,

    :S Thanks! I'm thrilled to hear that and you're welcome.

    -Mel :)

Title: Reluctance 08 Sep 2009 3:24 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that's wonderful! Snape said yes! It's too bad though, that Harry can't tell anyone, nor can if be made official.

    I hope that they get to a point that they don't have to hide it.

    I hope that Harry understands Snape better now, and that they become closer because of these revelations.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Yeah. Although he can tell Hermione and Ron. As for the "official" part, no it won't be...but some time down the track, you never know, it might be possible.  They will get to a point where they won't have to hide it but it will take quite some time to get there.

    He understands Snape a bit yes, but he's not too keen on saying anything or how to take the new information just yet. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Reluctance 08 Sep 2009 2:54 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I thought it might be funny is Harry was in there longer then he thought and everyone is searching for him, it might give his new father a chance to start with his new son, if you know what I mean.

    Author's Response:

    Phoenix1,

    I considered that option actually, but decided against it in favour of other scenes etc. I do sort of know what you mean, although Snape is more likely to "strangle" him for dissappearing and having him worried (not that he would admit that :P). Thanks.

    -Mel :)

Title: Reluctance 08 Sep 2009 1:34 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    haha, the room of emptiness is kind of cool.

    Author's Response:

    Writeurlife,

    Thanks, I wasn't too sure if I should add it. Glad i did though.

    -Mel :)

Title: Reluctance 08 Sep 2009 12:53 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chapter can't wait for more

    Author's Response:

    S.S,

    Thanks, glad to hear it.

    -Mel :)


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