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Reviews For Just a father
Author's Response: Ivy-green, When Snape is stressed...the essays suffer the consenquences lol. Heh, thanks for sharing your comments :P. Yeah, thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Harriverse, Thank-you :). Yes, I prefer Harry this way :P. Haha, yeah Snape rather thinks that taking points is something to do on principal rather than with strong reason, unless from Slytherin. What do you mean by "kids thinking down"? I didn't quite get that, but thanks for the review! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Raven knight, Yeah, he is trying lol. I'm happy to hear it. Your comments made me smile :). You say that the characters are still themselves? I'm thrilled! Characterisation is something I try my best at and seems to be most important to be, so thanks a lot!! Thank-you for your reivew! -Mel :)
-P.G. Author's Response: P.G, Yeah, Snape is trying. Thanks, I adored your comment and you're so right! Snape isn't the only one with doubts but whilst the man is doubting himself, Harry is doubting basically everything. I really wanted to show that. Thanks for the review and your comments! -Mel :)
Author's Response: DoC brown, Thank-you, for more details. I don't mind, no one is perfect and I do wish to improve. Although I do not believe that everyone has read the last Harry Potter book or that are all completly sure of all these details, so just to make sure that everyone is on the same page for these things may or may not be important to the story, I felt the need to add them. Although I do understand where you are coming from and I will try to lessen those things when I can, but sometimes it's just necessary for the story :P. Thanks though, I do like people pointing these things out; now that I'm aware I'll try to prevent it seemingly like I think you're all dumb or something lol. :P -Mel :)
I know that one of my teachers is doing the same thing!! heehehe Author's Response: Johnn101, Hehe and hopefully not to your work! :P -Mel :)
I'm looking forward to how the "tutoring" sessions go. It could either be a disaster or help jump start their relationship. Good job. Author's Response: EllaEleniel, Yeah, glad you liked it. Haha, yeah Harry does really need it at this point. And I'm happy to hear those comments although it may be both rather than either. Thanks. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Dramagirl1007, Nonetheless, thanks and I'm glad to hear it. -Mel :)
Author's Response: DoC brown, Which parts were you refering to or did you mean the entire conversation from the last chapter? It would be easier to fix or be aware of it you could inform me just which parts you mean. Thanks for the comment though; I do not take my readers to be idiots though, just so you know ;). -Mel :)
Author's Response: Crystal cove, Lol. I will be, very soon...promise! -Mel :) |
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