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Title: Studying 27 Sep 2009 11:17 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute! Snape wanting to play mama and whipe Harry's cheek! XD Too cute. But poor Harry having nightmares. That's not good. Maybe Snape can help him with that? *hopeful eyes* Guess I'll go see. Nice chapter! ^-^

    Author's Response:

    Ivy-green,

    Hehe, he was tempted to. Snape doesn't know about the nightmares yet, so unfortunatly Harry must suffer them without his help for now. Thanks.

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 13 Sep 2009 5:16 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    "I'm going to go to bed and die!" *laughs* Poor Harry! *keeps laughing* They're getting a little better. If Harry fell asleep the first study session or so I think Snape would have taken points on the spot! Love the ink on his face too. That was cute and funny. Leave it to Snape to not want to flat out say, "Mr. Potter, wipe the ink from your face," but opt to let a tired Harry figure out body language. Poor boy.

    Author's Response:

    Raven knight,

    Lol! Your review made me laugh, thanks! Yeah, poor Harry indeed. I do think he would have taken points, perhaps a detention to go with that? :P. Now that you mention it...that's hilarious, for I hadn't thought of it quite that way; "let a tired Harry figure out body language". Hahaha! Thanks, your review was great and it made me laugh! But you're right, of course and I enjoy your thoughts, so again, thank-you for your review! :D.

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 13 Sep 2009 2:41 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't wait for more

    Author's Response:

    Monica,

    Glad to hear it...should update soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 13 Sep 2009 3:24 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter xxx

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    Thank-you!

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 13 Sep 2009 1:28 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    One step at a time...
    Going well!

    Author's Response:

    Cckeimig,

    Yeah. Thanks!

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 13 Sep 2009 12:55 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice, I liked how you tricked us into thinking Snape was wiping away a tear--very clever. Nice work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    P.G,

    Trick you, never! Thank-you, glad to hear it.

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 13 Sep 2009 12:13 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    haha, snape going soft. yeah right! lolz. I like the slow development between the two of them.

    Author's Response:

    Writeurlife,

    Heh, yeah :P. Thank-you, glad to hear it.

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 12 Sep 2009 10:28 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very good can't wait for more

    Author's Response:

    S.S,

    Thanks, should update soon!

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 12 Sep 2009 9:14 pm
Reviewer: DoC Brown (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was fun (even with nightmares). Loved the part with Hermione and Ron.

    Author's Response:

    DoC brown,

    Happy to hear it, thanks!

    -Mel :)

Title: Studying 12 Sep 2009 9:06 pm
Reviewer: justjoanjm (Signed) [Report This]
    It's moving slow, but that makes sense. I like the Snape and Harry interaction and I'm anxious to see Snape realize Harry is a different person than the one he's been going on about. Still, I'm enjoying your view of thse characters.

    Author's Response:

    Justjoanjm,

    Yeah it has to move realistically or else there's not as much point. I'm thrileld by your comments, thanks. Snape will realize some things about Harry soon ;). Thank-you, I'm glad.

    -Mel :)


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