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Reviews For Just a father
Author's Response: Ivy-green, Of course he does, it's just buried somewhere inside him. Thanks! Haha, yeah true. :P. -Mel :)
I WEEP!!! *weeps* The sweetness. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Way to go Snape!!!Growing a geart and such. Author's Response: ObsessiveaboutSnape, Yeah? Thanks...thrilled to hear it! Yeah, although I presume the word was meant to be "heart" instead of "geart" lol. Thanks. -Mel :)
Hmm...The digging into Snape's thoughts was very well done. How he pictured what it would have been like if Harry were his son, and what he assumed Harry wanted from this arrangement and what he wanted, until concluding that they simply both wanted a family. It was a lovely train of thought. I felt bad for Harry on the Astronomy Tower wondering if he had godparents, and how he figured out that he wanted everything about the father/son relationship. *giggles* McGonagall's thoughts were funny, actually. She's trying to figure it out. *snort* She's confused...and flabbergasted. Aww, Snape is trying. I got excited when he said, "Harry," for the first time too. You'll get there, boys. You will. (ALthough the comment about Sirius aiming the bludger at the Slytherin Seeker...hilarious!) Author's Response: Raven knight, I adore your reviews! They make me happy, motivated and inspired. Plus they're quite helpful too. I am unsure how to respond to all of your comments etc without taking up a whole page, but thanks heaps and I loved them all. You're right too. I loved the comment about Sirius as well, it seemed to fit perfectly in my mind :P, him doing that. Poor McGonagall indeed. Oh and they're going to get there soon enough, although the accidental useage of Harry's first name will lead to more, hope you like! Will update soon, thanks so much! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Jessirose85, Indeed he is, and I agree. Thank-you! -Mel :)
-P.G. P.S. This is actually just a general comment for your fics, but do you realize that you spell ridiculous the wrong way? There is no 'e' in it. I hope I haven't upset you by pointing it out, but I know I've noticed it more than once in your fics and it's an easy correction to make :). Author's Response: P.G, Thank-you! Haha. And yeah, he's not doing this as a joke (hahaha, Snape and jokes do not belong in the same sentence!) and it's not just a job or obligation...he's really trying and wants to do this for Harry and in a way, himself. He's commited and is starting to really care for Harry. Thanks. And I keep forgetting how to spell that blasted word, thank-you for pointing that out and I'll fix them when I can but at the very least I will try to keep an eye on the word in the future. I am not upset that easily and I do apriciate my readers pointing out these thngs for it helps me to improve and I know that no one is perfect. Thanks for your review! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Justjoanjm, Heh, thanks. Your comments made my smile, thanks and I really apriciate your thoughts. I'm glad that you think I'm doing a good job in those areas! You're welcome. I will update soon. -Mel :)
It's very sweet that Snape is really trying to be an actual father to Harry, and I don't know how you do it, but it's really believable. And that's not easy to do with a character like Snape!!! Very well done. I can't wait for the next chappie!! Author's Response: Pandora, Thanks!! It's really believable, you say? Wow...that's one of the best comments I've received yet, thank-you! And I am thrilled. You're right though, it's not exactly an easy thing to do with a character like Snape, but I never knew that I was pulling it off that well, thanks! I will update asap. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Dramagirl1007, Thank-you, I'm pleased to hear that and yes he is certainly trying. I will and I'm updating very soon. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Llalva, I'm happy to hear that. Thanks for your comments, always glad to hear them. And it will be a while before they can really be trusting on a family level but they're working towards it and there will be moments in between. Thanks! -Mel :)
Author's Response: S.S, Thanks, I'm pleased to hear it. Will update asap. -Mel :) |
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