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Title: Having a heart 17 Dec 2011 12:52 am
Reviewer: AngelTwilly (Signed) [Report This]
    I love my Snape teehee :) And how he uses all the big words as a defense mechanism when he feels awkward. And I think you've really portrayed him really well! :D love this story (:
Title: Having a heart 09 Oct 2009 11:40 am
Reviewer: Wyrsa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Beautifull chapter! You were right, I loved it, it's so good written it took my breath away at some moments. Like:
    "Actually he felt as though it was all embarrassing, but for once in a very long time; he didn't care about his pride."
    You showed everything very realistically. Good for Snape he remembered about boundaries - I was so afraid he will become doting parent, he is unexperienced after all, and Harry is so lost...
    Yay for chapter, it's perfect Christmass chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Wyrsa,

    I really loved your review and comments, thanks. Christmas always has such potential for some great moments and heartwarming incidences. And yes, Snape is very inexperienced while harry is lost. This causes complications and only time and contanst devotion will get them over this.

    -Mel :)

Title: Having a heart 28 Sep 2009 7:08 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't be such a grinch, Sev! You like Christmas with Harry, and you know it! Very cute! I liked the hugging. Cute,cute,cute! XD Off to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Ivy-green,

    Sev, a grinch? NEVER! Haha, well he is allergic to happines, remember? It's a medical condition! ;). He is enjoying it though. Hugging is always well-liked, even by me! Thanks.

    -Mel :)

Title: Having a heart 24 Sep 2009 2:02 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, how sweet!
    I'm glad Snape is coming around.
    Did he get Harry a present?

    ps: I'm having problems typing this cause my 18yr old black cat is sleeping on my left arm ;D

    Author's Response:

    Mithrilandtj,

    Thanks. Yeah, it's good that he's coming around. He did get Harry something, yes.

    Heh, I love cats...especially black ones!

    -Mel :)

Title: Having a heart 23 Sep 2009 10:37 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this chapter. I'm glad Snape didn't take the tree down after Harry went to bed. Wow, Harry almost called Snape Dad. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response:

    Dramagirl007.

    I'm happy to hear that you liked it. Yeah, he was tempted to though! Indeed, Harry almost slipped it out. I will and yeah, I intend to. Thanks.

    -Mel :)

Title: Having a heart 23 Sep 2009 6:00 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was so sweet! I'm so glad that Severus was able to comfort Harry in his time of need. I can't wait to read about more of their holiday! Great job!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    P.G,

    Thanks. Snape is there for Harry more now indeed. Glad to hear it and thank-you.

    -Mel :)

Title: Having a heart 22 Sep 2009 7:24 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh dear I do Harry will be disappointed when he realizes that Sev has no presents for him.

    Author's Response:

    Hawkswench,

    What made you think that Snape has no presents for him? ;).

    -Mel :)

Title: Having a heart 22 Sep 2009 6:00 am
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just love this story. I eat every chapter like candy. Thank you so much.

    Author's Response:

    Starbuck1332,

    Thanks, I'm happy to hear that! Don't eat it all though, leave some for others lol. You're very welcome.

    -Mel :)

Title: Having a heart 22 Sep 2009 5:18 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that's so sweet! Severus is really starting to care for Harry, and it's so cute how Harry has talked him into not only having a Christmas tree, but decorating it with ornaments and colourful lights as well.

    I wonder if Severus bought Harry any presents. I hope so!

    What I love most, is how Severus constantly tries to question his own motives, ad realises how much Harry really needs them.

    I just can't wait for Christmas morning. Great job as usual. I'm really looking forward to the next chappie.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Thanks for yet another lovely review!

    Harry is starting to have more "powers" over Snape, although the boy seems less aware of it than the man hehe. Thanks, it is rather sweet. Snape did get Harry presents. Snape is doing a lot of questioning indeed, and is starting to really care for Harry, which is good. Thanks, glad to hear it!

    -Mel :)

Title: Having a heart 22 Sep 2009 3:31 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Thought it was a great chapter

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    Thank-you for letting me know :P.

    -Mel :)


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