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Reviews For Just a father
Author's Response: JAWorley, Yeah, well I don't have a spellchecker on the program I use and such. I do the best I can but thanks for letting me know that I still have a few things to fix up, will get around to them asap. I don't use "because" often although I am not sure why. But "for" also serves the same purpose. There is no inacuracy about using ' marks instead of " for speaking. Also many books/novels have been known to use these marks and I prefer to use them. Thanks for your thoughts and observations though for I am always trying to improve. Will update soon. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Dramagirl007, Thank-you, I'm glad you thought. I will, thanks and I'm updaing in just a moment. -Mel :)
Nice work! -P.G. Author's Response: P.G, Thank-you! Yeah it wasn't really a question but more like two innocent words leading to more questions. You're spot on about Snape and how hard this will be for him. You know what they say; "Everything is okay in the end. If it's not okay than it's not the end" so yeah, I'm sure they'll be able to work things out eventually...bit by bit with time. Thanks, and will update soon! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Jessirose85, Thanks! -Mel :)
Ah bother, bother here came complicated--Ol' Moldy Shorts! XD Author's Response: Fairner, Yes, two single words that are seemingly so innocent. I think it's more along the lines of both of your thoughts: a child being curious but also annoyed that he cannot do something he wants to. Although yes, it's mostly the first option in their case :P. Hehe. Yeah, more complications indeed. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Ivy-green, Heh, yeah but I will be updating soon so fret not :P. Thank-you for each of your reviews! Severus wants to take the plunge but you know know what he's like! They're both not used to getting happiness for themselves and are unsure, confused and a whole lotter other things but they'll get there ;). Although you're right, Sev does want to be a dad heh. Cute, in my option. I'm pleased to hear it and as I said: will update soon! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Mithrilandtj, Yeah I agree with you there! If only it were that simple for him. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Question, This wasn't something I did. It was just an annoying thing that occurs sometimes when I update, sorry. I fixed it now though :P. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Allywhatsits, There is no spell-check...is there? I do proof-read my chapters, but is it really that bad? I only noticed a few errors after further inspection...thanks for letting me know though. -Mel :)
Author's Response: S.S, Thanks, glad to hear it! I'm sorry about the bold but I actually didn't do that. It happens sometimes when I update and trust me, I hate it too!! I will fix it asap. Thanks. -Mel :) |
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