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Title: Beginning to unravel 19 Oct 2009 7:43 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I am majorly missing this fic, as well as Brother's of Bond! Please update a.s.a.p.!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    PG,

    Yeah sorry about that. But at least you got your wish now!

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 14 Oct 2009 8:35 pm
Reviewer: Vampire Skye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesomness! You should be exceptionally proud 2 have made this up. pleaz continue

    Author's Response:

    Vampire Skye,

    Thanks! And yes, I am really proud of my fic. I will.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 14 Oct 2009 12:02 am
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, dear. The one time Snape doesn't put something away, Harry manages to find it. Go figure! Just Harry's luck, too! However, I loved, loved, LOVED how Harry reacted! He would react selflessly like this! I love how he thinks of his real parents and not wanting to put Snape in that position! Awesome, awesomeness!

    Ooh, and now he's annoying on purpose! There is some Slytherin in the boy after all! I can so see Snape saying, "Well, be bored indoors!" *giggles* Oh, and now he's trying to be James. He's being very clever about this.

    Oh, no! He remembered that he left the book open! Oh, the boys need to talk about this!

    I feel bad for Harry, I do, but they both need this bond, not just Harry. I'm glad Snape decided to just do it and try to talk about it though. Oh, poor Snape thinkingn it wasn't meant to last. Oh man...Good job!

    I hope you're happy! I'm getting emotional! Harry screaming that he hated him! UGH! Oh, poor Snape. And poor Harry! He knew just what horrible things to say, too! The only good thing about this situation, is that Snape knows what caused the reaction in Harry. This must be fixed! Somehow!

    Author's Response:

    Raven Knight,

    Yeah, indeed. I am thrilled that you agree and approve of Harry's reaction because to me I can't see him realistically reacting any other way. And yes, there is quite some Slytherin in the boy hehe. He has figured out that what Snape hates most about him is the James aspect and so he is using that to try and distance them.

    Snape is determined to fix things, he will sooner realize that the boy needs this bond with him before he realizes that he needs it as well. Snape is as unsure and insecure as Harry in terms of their future. Both are not used to being granted such happiness or a family that actually cares about them.

    I wanted it to have the emotional effect, glad it did even though it was terrible for the boys. Yes, it will need some fixing and Snape isn't going to let this go so easily! Thanks for the review!!

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 09 Oct 2009 3:55 pm
Reviewer: Wyrsa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, that WAS strong emotional impact all right. And Snape is able to think and act accordingly to situation even under ultimate amount of stress. Yay to professor, he is as smart as they come, and to you for great job!
    (IMHO the part with acsidental overhearing of Harry's words was not nesessary, but that's only my opinion. Thank you for the story, it's special for me) Can't wait to see next part, sure (almost ) Snape's got right idea.)

    Author's Response:

    Wyrsa,

    Thanks, glad to hear it as I was aiming for that. The part with the accdiental overhearing of Harry's words were necessary, just maybe not yet ;). I'm happy to hear you feel that way about the fic. I thank you for the review! Snape's getting there, but he still has some learning and adjusting to do. Harry too.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 05 Oct 2009 8:26 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    It was emotional... poor Harry. Just like him to play the hero even if it cost him his own happiness.

    Author's Response:

    JAWorley,

    Exactly. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 05 Oct 2009 3:50 pm
Reviewer: gowvan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape has had enough heartbreak and loneliness in his life, I don't want him to be in the dark and continue to misunderstand what Harry is going though. Both deserve happiness and a family.

    Author's Response:

    Gowvan,

    I agree, and don't worry...he won't misunderstand what Harry is going through forever. They do deserve better and they will get there eventually, with constant progress and devotion.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 05 Oct 2009 3:46 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was dramatic. Poor Snape and Harry. I hope they have a very long talk in the morning. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response:

    Dramagirl007,

    Yes it was, as I intended. Yes they are certainly due for long talk! Thanks for the review and am updating soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 05 Oct 2009 2:27 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    >_> I would feel horrible too, this misunderstanding needs to be resolved good thing Severus is starting to believe his gut feeling.

    Author's Response:

    Fairner,

    Yeah. And it will be, Snape is determined not to let this go so easily. They'll get there ;).

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 04 Oct 2009 6:12 am
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Waaahhhh . . . my heart!!! That was too good.

    Author's Response:

    Starbuck1332,

    Thanks, glad you liked it.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 04 Oct 2009 4:52 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, good chapter! I was glad Snape didn't just figure everything out right away. he's smart, but he ain't God! Haha.

    I thought the emotional tones were set very well, so good job! Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Victory-Starr,

    Thanks. True, Snape has to sort through his thoughts and the clues like a normal person, no matter how smart he may be. Glad you like it and will update again soon.

    -Mel :)


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