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Reviews For Just a father
-P.G. Author's Response: PG, Yeah sorry about that. But at least you got your wish now! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Vampire Skye, Thanks! And yes, I am really proud of my fic. I will. -Mel :)
Ooh, and now he's annoying on purpose! There is some Slytherin in the boy after all! I can so see Snape saying, "Well, be bored indoors!" *giggles* Oh, and now he's trying to be James. He's being very clever about this. Oh, no! He remembered that he left the book open! Oh, the boys need to talk about this! I feel bad for Harry, I do, but they both need this bond, not just Harry. I'm glad Snape decided to just do it and try to talk about it though. Oh, poor Snape thinkingn it wasn't meant to last. Oh man...Good job! I hope you're happy! I'm getting emotional! Harry screaming that he hated him! UGH! Oh, poor Snape. And poor Harry! He knew just what horrible things to say, too! The only good thing about this situation, is that Snape knows what caused the reaction in Harry. This must be fixed! Somehow! Author's Response: Raven Knight, Yeah, indeed. I am thrilled that you agree and approve of Harry's reaction because to me I can't see him realistically reacting any other way. And yes, there is quite some Slytherin in the boy hehe. He has figured out that what Snape hates most about him is the James aspect and so he is using that to try and distance them. Snape is determined to fix things, he will sooner realize that the boy needs this bond with him before he realizes that he needs it as well. Snape is as unsure and insecure as Harry in terms of their future. Both are not used to being granted such happiness or a family that actually cares about them. I wanted it to have the emotional effect, glad it did even though it was terrible for the boys. Yes, it will need some fixing and Snape isn't going to let this go so easily! Thanks for the review!! -Mel :)
(IMHO the part with acsidental overhearing of Harry's words was not nesessary, but that's only my opinion. Thank you for the story, it's special for me) Can't wait to see next part, sure (almost ) Snape's got right idea.) Author's Response: Wyrsa, Thanks, glad to hear it as I was aiming for that. The part with the accdiental overhearing of Harry's words were necessary, just maybe not yet ;). I'm happy to hear you feel that way about the fic. I thank you for the review! Snape's getting there, but he still has some learning and adjusting to do. Harry too. -Mel :)
Author's Response: JAWorley, Exactly. Thanks for the review. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Gowvan, I agree, and don't worry...he won't misunderstand what Harry is going through forever. They do deserve better and they will get there eventually, with constant progress and devotion. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Dramagirl007, Yes it was, as I intended. Yes they are certainly due for long talk! Thanks for the review and am updating soon. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Fairner, Yeah. And it will be, Snape is determined not to let this go so easily. They'll get there ;). -Mel :)
Author's Response: Starbuck1332, Thanks, glad you liked it. -Mel :)
I thought the emotional tones were set very well, so good job! Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Victory-Starr, Thanks. True, Snape has to sort through his thoughts and the clues like a normal person, no matter how smart he may be. Glad you like it and will update again soon. -Mel :) |
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