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Title: Beginning to unravel 04 Oct 2009 4:31 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! That was so sad! I almost flipped out and I even started like talking to the computer screen saying things like, "He didn't mean it Severus! He loves you!" That was so sad!!! So beautifully sad! I'm a fan of the dramatic, and I really liked this. It had powerful emotion to me and I seriously started to tear up there at the end when Harry pushed Snape aways and...and...*sobs* SO good! Update soon please!

    Author's Response:

    Ivy-Green,

    It was meant to be :(. Haha, sign of good writing is when a reason starts yelling at their screen. I'm thrilled to hear that you liked it and that the emotion was set just as I hoped it would be. Aw, *hugs* thanks for reading and sending me a review. Will update really soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 04 Oct 2009 12:36 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, I'm glad Severus found out that he was a rational thinking man on time... I shudder to think what it would've done to Harry if Severus had thrown him out or really believed in the boy's act!
    I really like this soty and the way you develope the plot. I like the slow and awkward bonding - it's really touching and sweet, especially Severus' feelings on this (sorry, Sev, but yes, you are a true softy at heart, I always believed firmly in that, you did love Lily to the point of obsession - that's quite the deep emotion I would say... ;-)).
    Keep up the good story - I really look forward to your updates!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Pellegrina,

    He was close, normally he might have thrown Harry out but he was in denial and didn't want to let go so easily. I'm thrilled to hear that you really like this fic and the plot. I wanted it to have a more realistic touch with taking it slowly etc. And yes I believe you too, Snape is a softy deep down with quite deep emotion but is lacking the useage. But if it's been building up than it has to come out someway, right? :P

    Thanks and I will be updating soon!

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 10:46 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!! I feel so sad for Harry and Snape. It just seems that everything good in Harry's life is taken away from him.

    I just hope that Snape has truly realised what the problem is, and will talk to Harry before it's too late.

    Beautiful, strong emotion-filled chapter. Great work.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Yeah, it is but hopefully that won't last forever. Snape is learning but hasn't entirely figured it all out yet. But they will be having a long talk, indeed. Glad you liked it and thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 8:03 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    Please let Snape know why Harry is doing this and put a stop to it. They so need each other.

    Author's Response:

    DazzlingD,

    Yes, Snape is not ready to let this go just yet so don't worry, they'll sort this out one way or another. They do need each other, and are slowly starting to realize that.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 7:39 pm
Reviewer: justjoanjm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Very angsty. I sure hope they sort things out quickly.

    Author's Response:

    Justjoanjm,

    Thanks and that was my intent. They will sort this out, Snape won't let go of this that easily yet, he's more attached than he realizes.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 6:59 pm
Reviewer: Mandy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I hope you'll update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Mandy,

    Thanks and I will.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 5:20 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    oh, poor snape! please have him make harry all better/reassured

    Author's Response:

    Writeurlife,

    Yeah, I know. They will be having a long talk and Snape isn't gonna give up just yet, so rest assured that they will sort this out one way or another.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 1:55 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter. It's sad I hope Snape figures the real reason why Harry doesn't want him as a father. Update soon

    Author's Response:

    S.S,

    Thank you. Yeah they'll be sorting things out soon. Will update asap.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 1:03 pm
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    I cried during Harry's rant...poor Sev..he's only trying to do what's right by Harry xx

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    Aw, really? I was hoping that the emtions were set in this fic as it was my intent. And yeah, Snape is trying to do things right but he's still learning. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 11:43 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, come on, Snape! Put the pieces together!
    He knows the potion and he heard Harry say "I don't want him to die"
    Use that Slytherin brain!

    Author's Response:

    Mithrilandtj,

    Hehe, he's trying! He's in doubt and being a bit insecure, but he's figuring it out and is determined to fix this. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)


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