Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Just a father
Title: In Darkness 16 Feb 2010 7:07 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    His Christmas was just "alright??" Boy he has a way for understatement. Enjoyed this story a lot. I am home because of a on the job injury so I am revisiting stories I have read before. This one I had never read, but now I'm glad I have. Thank you! I await your updates!! BTW, am I wrong in thinking that "pull back into darkness" is the beginnings of Harry's and moldy Voldy's link being discovered? I also don't see Severus being a spy much longer. How much am I off??

    Author's Response:

    Alifromnm,

    Haha, yeah but he couldn't really say otherwise :P. There is a very strong possibility of you being correct about the Harry-Voldemort link, however I am not revealing anything else involving that at this point. As for Severus remaining a spy...that has certainly been complicated.

    Hope you get better soon and thanks heaps for the review!

    -Mel :)

Title: In Darkness 29 Jan 2010 12:02 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it but not sure how Harry bit his nose! Thank you for updating

    Author's Response:

    Fmh,

    Thanks, and yeah I've fixed that up now...haha, noise indeed, how had I missed that? You're welcome, thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: In Darkness 27 Jan 2010 8:38 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    haha funny harry in the end ^^ yes keep sev all to yourself i would too XD

    i think severus is getting a lot better with the dad business, i hope voldermort stops or that sev realizes.

    Author's Response:

    Fairner,

    Haha, yeah I agree. Who wouldn't? :P. I agree, he's getting better. Thanks for the review!

    -Mel :)

Title: In Darkness 26 Jan 2010 10:20 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow this was a dramatic chapter. That Nightmare scared me as well. I love this story. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response:

    Dramagirl007,

    Thanks. Really? I hoped it would be that way, as a truly scary dream...terrifying enough for Harry to scream out to Snape like that, with that name. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: In Darkness 26 Jan 2010 4:16 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter! It was great that Snape automatically reacted like a parent in the beginning, even if he turned a bit insensitive about it after realizing what had woken him. It was sweet that he was there for Harry when he really needed him. This fic makes me smile so much--please write more soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    PG,

    Yay. And yeah, he just reacted without allowing his mind to catch up. I'm glad this fic makes you smile, I love it too, although the reviews I adore. I'm writing more and will update again soon.

    -Mel :)



    Author's Response:

    PG,

    Yay. And yeah, he just reacted without allowing his mind to catch up. I'm glad this fic makes you smile, I love it too, although the reviews I adore. I'm writing more and will update again soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: In Darkness 26 Jan 2010 1:27 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was so sad but sweet too. Poor Harry. Does the boy ever get any relief! Poor kid.

    Snape is so funny. I think that he cares a lot more about Harry than he'd willing to admit.

    Can't wait for the next chappie.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Thanks, and no I don't think Harry gets much moment to just feel relief :P. Snape certainly cares more than he's letting on, even to himself. In a way I feel sorry for him, lol. Thanks, will update soon!

    -Mel :)

Title: In Darkness 25 Jan 2010 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Ran (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another beautiful chapter.
    Severus is stubborn, he refused to say "I love you". However, he is warming up towards Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Ran,

    Thanks. And yes he is, but he's certainly warming up to Harry.

    -Mel :)

Title: In Darkness 25 Jan 2010 7:42 pm
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this fic, and this was another enjoyable chapter. One thing did bother me though (actually it made me laugh out loud) "Hopping from foot to foot and biting his nose" How does one actually bite their own nose. I can't picture it myself, but thinking about it just makes me giggle. LOL

    Author's Response:

    Dragonclaw74,

    Thanks, I'm thrilled to hear that. Oh yes, that was not meant to be there! bite his nose, how does one go about that?! haha, thanks for pointing it out, I'm shocked I missed it :P

    -Mel :)

Title: In Darkness 25 Jan 2010 2:41 pm
Reviewer: Chandramas (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely sweet chapter! and I love that Severus isn't able to tell "I love you" to Harry *yet*.
    Poor Harry, what horrible nigthmare! Is that Evil-Voldy's doing? Lucky he has His 'Daddy' now!

    Author's Response:

    Chandramas,

    Thankyou :P. Yeah, "yet". And part of it's Moldy-short's doing but it could have been worst, such as if Harry didn't have Snape. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: In Darkness 25 Jan 2010 7:41 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    'I do not hate you' Snape answered instead. 'Nor do I not wish death or harm upon you, Harry. Leave it at that'.- JUST SAY IT SNAPE!!! It's not going to kill you, stubborn man! *snorts*

    Oh water! That was too sweet! Sad, but sweet. What a horrible nightmare to have! I'd cry and call out to my daddy too! Not that mine would run to me since I'm five hours away, but still. Poor little Harry!

    Oh, the part where Snape fell out of bed to get to Harry was too funny! I could just see him snap awake, trying to think and do several things all at once only to fall out of bed. XD Hilarious image, really! :D

    And the whole kitchen scene, I felt so bad for Harry! Thinking Snape doesn't like him when the man clearly does. But I understand the uncertainty of things too. I'm just glad Snape was able to make Harry feel a bit better.

    When they got back though, I was SURE Snape was going to tell Harry that he loved him, but no, Snape had to be all high and mighty man about it and just tell him not to be late. *snort* I was just so sure...but then it IS Snape I'm typing about.

    I did find a little mistake though that really bothered me in here: "transfigured his clothes to search out the treat before his mind woke enough"- I think you meant "Threat" I make all kinds of mistakes like this, and I just thought you'd want to know too. If you want me to shutup next time tell me, because I don't want to be rude!

    But this was a great chappie water! You saved my day with it! (had a terrible day) So thanks so much for updating!! I anxiously await more! :)

    Author's Response:

    Ivy-green,

    Honestly your reviews are truly a wonderful treat indeed!

    Your "Stubborn man' comment made me laugh, I do so every time I read it. I can't imagine anyone not crying out after such a nightmare, I tried to make it as horrible as possible. I could strangly picture him falling out of bed. I also don't think he's used to such sound in his house since his parents had died a long time ago and since then it's been deathly silent.

    Ha! Snape wanted to tell him, but of course he's a stubborn man and refused it once again. That and I do try to keep him in character :P. Oh and thanks for pointing out the mistake, I do want people to let me know so I can fix or avoid it.

    I'm glad I turned your terrible day into a nicer one, your reviews have the same effect- I really love them! And thanks, I'll update again quite soon.

    -Mel :)


Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5