well at least they got that sorted! i'm happy harry wont be going back to the dursleys but then again are they rushing it? i dont think so i think the sooner the better ^^ synthia uh...is...his cousin?
Lovely chapter. Synthia? Don't have a clue, but she reminds me of a character from another author who was fae.
Snape is incredibly well done. I also like how sweet Harry is and yet at the same time you can see the scars from the Dursley's. I can't wait to see more of this story!
I have no idea who Synthia is but I liked the chapter very much. I especially liked the last paragraph. I look forward to teh next bit when you get it finished.
Title: Hogwarts afresh
| 26 Feb 2010 6:12 pm
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Reviewer: Wyrsa (Anonymous)
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Love your story! Magic of emotions. )) Showes well insecurities of a child and adult unaccustomed to family. Love your Snape, he is very good for the role he took upon himself. Thank you for good work. Please, please, update soon!))
Title: Hogwarts afresh
| 25 Feb 2010 8:18 am
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Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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I really liked the chapter, don't be so hard on yourself. Synthia? Have no theory. I like that harry and snape were able to talk about what was important without either of them losing their temper. Great chapter.
Synthtia maybe be Severus' older sister xx
Loved the chapter xx
Professor Sinastra, maybe?
There were a couple of tense issues that you might want to clean up, but other than that the chapter was quite good.
I loved this so much--who'd of thought Harry could be so depressed over Snape's 'rejection' so early in the game? As for Synthia, I have no idea. At first, I felt like maybe it was someone Snape was in love with, but the ending statement kind of squashed that idea for me. After all, if he was in love with Synthia, he wouldn't have last felt those sorts of feelings with Lily. I can't wait to find out more about her.
-P.G.
Oh that was so so sweet. I'm so glad that Harry knows now that Snape cares for him.
Ooh, who is Synthia. My brain is just not working.
Great chappie! :)
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