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Title: Hogwarts afresh 24 Feb 2010 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I'm surprised Snape didn't deduct house points from Gryffindor anyway because of the curfew issue. I'm glad they talked though. I liked this chapter. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Title: Hogwarts afresh 24 Feb 2010 10:11 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    They are at a difficult impasse right now. Both of them want to be a family, but are tempered a bit by fear. They are both afraid that the other will change their mind at some point. I hope that Severus won't hold back for too much longer and give them both what they really want.

    Dumbledore should have seen something like this coming and Severus is right; he should have told Harry about the wards. What is done is done, though. In the long run, I feel that it is best. Now Dumbledore cannot nix the idea by bringing up the blood wards.

    Great chapter! As to Synthia, I didn't get the impression that she was Severus' girlfriend, so I will assume that she is a close friend or perhaps a relative.
Title: Hogwarts afresh 24 Feb 2010 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor confused Harry. Poor Sev-dealing with "emotions"! (can't you just see him shake with just the thought of it) And how they do manage to get their wires of comunication crossed. . .

    Wondeful chapter.

    V.
Title: Hogwarts afresh 24 Feb 2010 6:48 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Isn't it amazing how one small child cam worm their way into your heart. It matters not if it is by birth or adoptions, all parents feel that. Nicely done!
Title: Hogwarts afresh 24 Feb 2010 4:08 pm
Reviewer: Ella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the story so far... but the totally random OC (I'm assuming) popping up out of nowhere is disappointing.

    Author's Response:

    Ella,

    Thanks. But might I ask how exactly is is "diapointing"? And she is not entirely random, there is a purpose to her existence.

    -Mel :)


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