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Title: A thoughtful decision 05 Sep 2009 10:27 pm
Reviewer: Wyrsa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, this beginning is rather fun! DD Definitely would LOVE to see more! Good luck!!

    Author's Response:

    Wyrsa,

    Haha, yeah? Cool, I'm pleased that you think so.

    Thank-you for the review, altough I doubt I need felix felicius (forgive me if I cannot spell it!), but I'll keep it in mind. More coming soon!

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 05 Sep 2009 10:07 pm
Reviewer: min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please continue!

    Author's Response:

    Min,

    Have no fear...I fully intend to continue! Shall update very soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 05 Sep 2009 9:23 pm
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    love it-

    Author's Response:

    Petuniac3,

    Glad to hear it, :P.

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 05 Sep 2009 8:52 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the idea

    Author's Response:

    Monica,

    Thanks, I do too :P

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 05 Sep 2009 8:32 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting. Never read a story with this kind of plot. Update soon! I really want to read what happens next!!

    Author's Response:

    Glad to hear it. And I'm happy to have a more unique plot, yay!

    I will update soon, don't fret lol. I won't leave my readers and reviewers hanging too long, promise!

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 05 Sep 2009 8:05 pm
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ok, great start. I have never read a story where harry is so determined to get help. I love snape and harry together, hence why I read this site, so I look forward to reading more.

    Author's Response:

    Missny1,

    Thanks. I'm happy to hear this is a new sort of story for you. Come to think of it, I haven't read a story about Harry like that either. I agree with you involving this site, I do not think this fic would ever have been published or even written if I hadn't of found such a site with their intereations.

    Shall update fic very soon, thanks for reading and reviewing!

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 05 Sep 2009 7:54 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I would like to see the chapter on how Harry ask Sev to be his dad. So far the story is well written, a few word mistakes like "now many sons?" instead of how many sons. It flows smoothly and keeps the reader interested.

    Author's Response:

    hawkswench,

    Harry will be asking Snape VERY soon, so not to fear :P. Thank-you, I always love praise for my writing. THe mistake you've mentioned I shall get around to fixing asap. Thanks for letting me know. Your comments about the flowing of the story etc made me happy and I am thrilled to hear so. Thanks for the review.

    Story will be updated soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 05 Sep 2009 6:51 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice beginning. I love how Snape is feeling so protective of Harry. I wonder what is motivating him. Visions of Lily, I guess.

    I can't wait for the next chappie. I'd love to see DD's face at Harry and Snape getting along!

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Thank-you :). I am confused where you saw the "Snape is feeling so protective of Harry" as I do not recall putting that in the fic just yet, but I must have missed it or else not understand your comment. But yes he is; visions of Lily do many things to him.

    Glad to hear it. Dumbledore will be making an appearance soon and if it's a reaction you want to the pair getting along...well there is on in the future and I find it rather amusing, although I do not believe it is Dumbledore. Anyway, thanks for the review!

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 05 Sep 2009 6:37 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    i'm rather interested to see where you go with this. why would snape agree/how is harry going to get snape to agree?

    Author's Response:

    Writeurlife,

    Glad to hear it but where is the fun if I tell you now? :P. Snape will have numerous reasons to agree if he does and Harry will not be giving up or taking "no" for an answer if that is to occur, so in a roundabout I am confirming that Snape will agree at some point, either by his choice or forced (or both!).

    -Mel :)

Title: A thoughtful decision 05 Sep 2009 6:26 pm
Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous) [Report This]
    An interesting concept. Harry's decision to ask Snape already shows that he is thinking about it, not just making an arbitrary decision based on childish notions. If he were to present such arguments to Snape, I'm sure the man would be able to see a little beyond what he is used to seeing when he looks at Harry. Plus, the idea of Snape helping Harry with his studies...what better way to protect the child than to give the child the knowledge to protect himself?

    I hope you continue this story. I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response:

    Emma,

    Thanks for your review! I'm glad you like the concept. Yes Harry has put quite some thought into "why" but not so much the "how" just yet. Although he does intend to present such arguements to Snape....rather soon, I might add. I agree with your protective insight, but I hadn't fully considered it in that aspect; I agree.

    I will be continuing this story, for sure. Have already written quite a few chapters for it. I will update either tonight or perhaps tomorrow sometime.

    -Mel :)


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