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Reviews For Just a father
Loved the chapter xx
There were a couple of tense issues that you might want to clean up, but other than that the chapter was quite good.
-P.G.
Ooh, who is Synthia. My brain is just not working. Great chappie! :)
Dumbledore should have seen something like this coming and Severus is right; he should have told Harry about the wards. What is done is done, though. In the long run, I feel that it is best. Now Dumbledore cannot nix the idea by bringing up the blood wards. Great chapter! As to Synthia, I didn't get the impression that she was Severus' girlfriend, so I will assume that she is a close friend or perhaps a relative.
Wondeful chapter. V.
Author's Response: Ella, Thanks. But might I ask how exactly is is "diapointing"? And she is not entirely random, there is a purpose to her existence. -Mel :) |
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