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Title: Hogwarts afresh 25 Feb 2010 8:18 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really liked the chapter, don't be so hard on yourself. Synthia? Have no theory. I like that harry and snape were able to talk about what was important without either of them losing their temper. Great chapter.
Title: Hogwarts afresh 25 Feb 2010 6:04 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Synthtia maybe be Severus' older sister xx

    Loved the chapter xx
Title: Hogwarts afresh 25 Feb 2010 4:39 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    Professor Sinastra, maybe?

    There were a couple of tense issues that you might want to clean up, but other than that the chapter was quite good.
Title: Hogwarts afresh 25 Feb 2010 2:43 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this so much--who'd of thought Harry could be so depressed over Snape's 'rejection' so early in the game? As for Synthia, I have no idea. At first, I felt like maybe it was someone Snape was in love with, but the ending statement kind of squashed that idea for me. After all, if he was in love with Synthia, he wouldn't have last felt those sorts of feelings with Lily. I can't wait to find out more about her.

    -P.G.
Title: Hogwarts afresh 25 Feb 2010 1:50 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was so so sweet. I'm so glad that Harry knows now that Snape cares for him.

    Ooh, who is Synthia. My brain is just not working.

    Great chappie! :)
Title: Hogwarts afresh 24 Feb 2010 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I'm surprised Snape didn't deduct house points from Gryffindor anyway because of the curfew issue. I'm glad they talked though. I liked this chapter. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Title: Hogwarts afresh 24 Feb 2010 10:11 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    They are at a difficult impasse right now. Both of them want to be a family, but are tempered a bit by fear. They are both afraid that the other will change their mind at some point. I hope that Severus won't hold back for too much longer and give them both what they really want.

    Dumbledore should have seen something like this coming and Severus is right; he should have told Harry about the wards. What is done is done, though. In the long run, I feel that it is best. Now Dumbledore cannot nix the idea by bringing up the blood wards.

    Great chapter! As to Synthia, I didn't get the impression that she was Severus' girlfriend, so I will assume that she is a close friend or perhaps a relative.
Title: Hogwarts afresh 24 Feb 2010 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor confused Harry. Poor Sev-dealing with "emotions"! (can't you just see him shake with just the thought of it) And how they do manage to get their wires of comunication crossed. . .

    Wondeful chapter.

    V.
Title: Hogwarts afresh 24 Feb 2010 6:48 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Isn't it amazing how one small child cam worm their way into your heart. It matters not if it is by birth or adoptions, all parents feel that. Nicely done!
Title: Hogwarts afresh 24 Feb 2010 4:08 pm
Reviewer: Ella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the story so far... but the totally random OC (I'm assuming) popping up out of nowhere is disappointing.

    Author's Response:

    Ella,

    Thanks. But might I ask how exactly is is "diapointing"? And she is not entirely random, there is a purpose to her existence.

    -Mel :)


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