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Title: Having a heart 09 Oct 2009 11:40 am
Reviewer: Wyrsa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Beautifull chapter! You were right, I loved it, it's so good written it took my breath away at some moments. Like:
    "Actually he felt as though it was all embarrassing, but for once in a very long time; he didn't care about his pride."
    You showed everything very realistically. Good for Snape he remembered about boundaries - I was so afraid he will become doting parent, he is unexperienced after all, and Harry is so lost...
    Yay for chapter, it's perfect Christmass chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Wyrsa,

    I really loved your review and comments, thanks. Christmas always has such potential for some great moments and heartwarming incidences. And yes, Snape is very inexperienced while harry is lost. This causes complications and only time and contanst devotion will get them over this.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 05 Oct 2009 8:26 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    It was emotional... poor Harry. Just like him to play the hero even if it cost him his own happiness.

    Author's Response:

    JAWorley,

    Exactly. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 05 Oct 2009 3:50 pm
Reviewer: gowvan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape has had enough heartbreak and loneliness in his life, I don't want him to be in the dark and continue to misunderstand what Harry is going though. Both deserve happiness and a family.

    Author's Response:

    Gowvan,

    I agree, and don't worry...he won't misunderstand what Harry is going through forever. They do deserve better and they will get there eventually, with constant progress and devotion.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 05 Oct 2009 3:46 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was dramatic. Poor Snape and Harry. I hope they have a very long talk in the morning. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response:

    Dramagirl007,

    Yes it was, as I intended. Yes they are certainly due for long talk! Thanks for the review and am updating soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 05 Oct 2009 2:27 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    >_> I would feel horrible too, this misunderstanding needs to be resolved good thing Severus is starting to believe his gut feeling.

    Author's Response:

    Fairner,

    Yeah. And it will be, Snape is determined not to let this go so easily. They'll get there ;).

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 04 Oct 2009 6:12 am
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Waaahhhh . . . my heart!!! That was too good.

    Author's Response:

    Starbuck1332,

    Thanks, glad you liked it.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 04 Oct 2009 4:52 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, good chapter! I was glad Snape didn't just figure everything out right away. he's smart, but he ain't God! Haha.

    I thought the emotional tones were set very well, so good job! Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Victory-Starr,

    Thanks. True, Snape has to sort through his thoughts and the clues like a normal person, no matter how smart he may be. Glad you like it and will update again soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 04 Oct 2009 4:31 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! That was so sad! I almost flipped out and I even started like talking to the computer screen saying things like, "He didn't mean it Severus! He loves you!" That was so sad!!! So beautifully sad! I'm a fan of the dramatic, and I really liked this. It had powerful emotion to me and I seriously started to tear up there at the end when Harry pushed Snape aways and...and...*sobs* SO good! Update soon please!

    Author's Response:

    Ivy-Green,

    It was meant to be :(. Haha, sign of good writing is when a reason starts yelling at their screen. I'm thrilled to hear that you liked it and that the emotion was set just as I hoped it would be. Aw, *hugs* thanks for reading and sending me a review. Will update really soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 04 Oct 2009 12:36 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, I'm glad Severus found out that he was a rational thinking man on time... I shudder to think what it would've done to Harry if Severus had thrown him out or really believed in the boy's act!
    I really like this soty and the way you develope the plot. I like the slow and awkward bonding - it's really touching and sweet, especially Severus' feelings on this (sorry, Sev, but yes, you are a true softy at heart, I always believed firmly in that, you did love Lily to the point of obsession - that's quite the deep emotion I would say... ;-)).
    Keep up the good story - I really look forward to your updates!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Pellegrina,

    He was close, normally he might have thrown Harry out but he was in denial and didn't want to let go so easily. I'm thrilled to hear that you really like this fic and the plot. I wanted it to have a more realistic touch with taking it slowly etc. And yes I believe you too, Snape is a softy deep down with quite deep emotion but is lacking the useage. But if it's been building up than it has to come out someway, right? :P

    Thanks and I will be updating soon!

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 10:46 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!! I feel so sad for Harry and Snape. It just seems that everything good in Harry's life is taken away from him.

    I just hope that Snape has truly realised what the problem is, and will talk to Harry before it's too late.

    Beautiful, strong emotion-filled chapter. Great work.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Yeah, it is but hopefully that won't last forever. Snape is learning but hasn't entirely figured it all out yet. But they will be having a long talk, indeed. Glad you liked it and thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)


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