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Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 8:03 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    Please let Snape know why Harry is doing this and put a stop to it. They so need each other.

    Author's Response:

    DazzlingD,

    Yes, Snape is not ready to let this go just yet so don't worry, they'll sort this out one way or another. They do need each other, and are slowly starting to realize that.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 7:39 pm
Reviewer: justjoanjm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Very angsty. I sure hope they sort things out quickly.

    Author's Response:

    Justjoanjm,

    Thanks and that was my intent. They will sort this out, Snape won't let go of this that easily yet, he's more attached than he realizes.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 6:59 pm
Reviewer: Mandy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I hope you'll update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Mandy,

    Thanks and I will.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 5:20 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    oh, poor snape! please have him make harry all better/reassured

    Author's Response:

    Writeurlife,

    Yeah, I know. They will be having a long talk and Snape isn't gonna give up just yet, so rest assured that they will sort this out one way or another.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 1:55 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter. It's sad I hope Snape figures the real reason why Harry doesn't want him as a father. Update soon

    Author's Response:

    S.S,

    Thank you. Yeah they'll be sorting things out soon. Will update asap.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 1:03 pm
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    I cried during Harry's rant...poor Sev..he's only trying to do what's right by Harry xx

    Author's Response:

    Jessirose85,

    Aw, really? I was hoping that the emtions were set in this fic as it was my intent. And yeah, Snape is trying to do things right but he's still learning. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 11:43 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, come on, Snape! Put the pieces together!
    He knows the potion and he heard Harry say "I don't want him to die"
    Use that Slytherin brain!

    Author's Response:

    Mithrilandtj,

    Hehe, he's trying! He's in doubt and being a bit insecure, but he's figuring it out and is determined to fix this. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: Beginning to unravel 03 Oct 2009 10:48 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    yes, very good!

    Author's Response:

    Min,

    Thanks. Glad you thought so.

    -Mel :)

Title: Why not? 03 Oct 2009 6:56 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Some grammar and spelling mistakes, but otherwise good. The only other thing that really bothers me is that you constantly use the word "for" instead of "because." Also you use ' around speaking instead of " Just some thoughts to help.

    Author's Response:

    JAWorley,

    Yeah, well I don't have a spellchecker on the program I use and such. I do the best I can but thanks for letting me know that I still have a few things to fix up, will get around to them asap. I don't use "because" often although I am not sure why. But "for" also serves the same purpose. There is no inacuracy about using ' marks instead of " for speaking. Also many books/novels have been known to use these marks and I prefer to use them. Thanks for your thoughts and observations though for I am always trying to improve. Will update soon.

    -Mel :)

Title: Spinner's Christmas 03 Oct 2009 6:40 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad to see updates!

    Author's Response:

    JAWorley,

    I'm so glad to see reviews! Lol :P. Will update very soon.

    -Mel :)


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