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Reviews For Green Eyes and Hedwig
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I read a poem years ago in this same style, but written like a computer manual. It cracked me up so badly that I vowed one day to master that technique. :o)
Author's Response: Combining two or more challenges is double or triple the fun! I'll work on getting this finished pretty soon. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I don't usually like poetry I read, and then I have to wonder if I'm just being close-minded. But then again, there's a difference between emo blank verse and lighter, rhyming verse.
Author's Response: I struggled with whether Dr. Seuss's style was wrong for the Hedwig challenge, and I agree it isn't the best coupling. The thing is, though, I have trouble writing anything dark in prose. I figured it was a good chance to respond to a challenge I couldn't normally do, because the poetry medium is much easier. The only way I could ever write a Severitus is in this same style. I appreciate that you've been honest in your reaction. If I never get anything but good reviews, I have to wonder about sincerity, so having someone tell me they weren't thrilled is actually quite welcome. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: That's so sweet that you bond over HP fics with your mom. *sniffs* I'm so happy it entertained you guys. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'll try to come up with something really good for the next part.
Author's Response: "Do you ask a fish how it swims? Or a bird how it flies? No, siree, you don't!" Sorry, I love my Wonka. :o) I practice a lot writing Dr. Seuss-style poems, so it wasn't very hard. Glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm working on the rescue as we speak (I write poetry a heck of a lot faster than prose). I appreciate the review!
You are so talented. Everything rhymed so beautifully. I love it and can't wait for more. Poor Harry I hope that he's rescued! Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, and the compliments! Harry will definitely be rescued. "But by whom?" Gee, on P&S, who knows? :o)
It's really clever, and really well written! They burnt the map! That's sacrilege!! Glad Hedwig got away though and I bet I can guess where she goes! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Author's Response: I didn't want to burn the map, but forced myself to (it's rather Mary Sue-ish to always save the best things and people from disaster). I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. The Dr. Seuss meter is easy to get stuck in your head, though. I'm even starting to think in amphibrachic hexameter. |
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