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Title: Chapter 1 21 Jul 2022 12:51 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a terrific start to your story, though poor Harry. It’s so good, I can’t believe it’s your first fic. Looking forward to reading on.
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jan 2010 11:59 pm
Reviewer: Wrinkled_Fabric (Signed) [Report This]
    Me again, your resident stalker and potential kidnapper ^_^ Sorry for the randomness that is a chapter one review, I just have something you might be interested in.

    I got you a present.

    Boredom abounds and my attempts to work turned into... well you'll see...

    I know there is a way of posting the link directly, but I tried to find it and managed to delete everything from every album... so I'll be on the safe side this time and hope you'll be able to find it...

    http://s822.photobucket.com/albums/zz143/georgee_girl3/Portfolio/Posters/

    Password is Chocolate.

    As you can probably guess, there's been things added today. And while I'm not a hundred percent happy with it, if I don't just hand it over already, I'll never get back to work ^_^

    Do with it what you will, I'm not fussed.

    :D

    Fabx

    Author's Response:

    Hi again!  I can’t tell you how amazingly, radiantly, glowy-like, cheerfully, burstingly happy I am ^-^ - I kinda just sit and stare for long periods of time at this pic... it’s just so... *squeals and hugs you and throws muffins and cookies and all manner of sweet things at you... in a gentle, grateful kinda way ^^*

    Oh, and yeah, I found it ^^ - I love it so freakin’ much!!! – how can you not be 500% happy with it!  I’m ecstatic for one ^^ - and I was so hyped up I couldn’t help squealing really loudly (you know, before the incessant, high-pitched giggling started... hasn’t stopped yet ^^) and my mum, who only vaguely knows what a fanfic is heard me and I showed her how wonderful the people who take the time to read my fics are and even she was really amazed by it – she loved it and I love it and it’s so awesome!!! *glomps u* ^^

    I hope you don’t mind but I’d LOVE to use it as my banner-thingy in my fic notes (if you know what I mean ^^... and as soon as I figure out how to ^^) – it’s so incredibly wonderful... I’m still riding the high from it *sighs happily*... and I had to reread your review to see what you liked best (which really came in handy ^^) and I noticed you seemed to like Sev carrying Harry so I wrote an extra little bit from Harry’s POV to prolong the carrying moment and I also tried to write you a fic but it turned into something so long and convoluted and so not what I was aiming for that I can only hope to try again and get it right but in the meantime you get early what will be at the beginning of next chapter (it’s such a small thank you, but everytime I say thank you (and there will be many more ^^) is heartfelt and giggly and ecstatic and I totally think you spend your time at work wisely ^-^)

    ~

    Floating.  He was floating.  The world moving in rippling waves, swimming before his barely open eyes before the effort became too much and they closed again with a tickle of lashes against his prickling cheeks.  The warmth and comfort were still there, though the heaviness was gone and he was just... floating.  Floating with strange swaying, jerking movements.  Floating... in such a strange position.  Hadn’t he been lying flat a minute ago?  On his stomach?  He could dimly feel his body and how he was, in fact, floating on his back in a sort of upwards-facing foetal position.  Oh, he was being carried.  Well, that was good too.  Being held.  It had been so long since he’d been held, and he didn’t think he ever had been held quite like this.  He would have lifted his head if it were possible but it seemed to be made of lead and was throbbing like an open wound so he left it hanging limply where it was, neck braced on something warm and sturdy and face open to the cool air and the night sky.  He was comfortable so there wasn’t much point in trying to move.  Somehow, he just knew he was safe.  He trusted in that safety the way he was trusting his weight to the arms of whoever was now carrying him; not entirely consciously but implicitly regardless.  He didn’t need to get away from this, he was safe and warm and comfortable and he really didn’t want to be anywhere else.

    He missed that hand that had held his though.  His own felt so cold without it, in stark contrast to the rest of his body, as though it lay outside the warmth of a blanket that had him enveloped.  Something inside him thought that maybe he’d always missed that hand on his, and he always would, but the ache for it wasn’t going anywhere and was so familiar it felt like a part of him, so he didn’t fuss over its loss.  He was content enough here.  He was being held... and rocked.  Just slightly.  His eyes were closed and his breathing was slowing and he was melting into those arms that had him safely ensconced and he was being rocked and swayed.  Where the wind blows the cradle will rock... Yes, he could happily stay here forever.  As long as he was warm.  So very warm.

    ~

    Anyway, like I said, not much of a thank you but I hope it tides you over a bit ‘til I update ^^ (and I had to ask how that nursery rhyme went ‘cause I had music playing and couldn’t think of it and mum instantly thought I was writing something creepy... should I be offended or flattered? ^^ oh, and maybe... I dunno... 50 points?  What do you reckon...?

    Thank you! (THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!) - oh, and hope you had a happy easter ^^

Title: Chapter 1 23 Dec 2009 5:54 am
Reviewer: Anonomous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it! You are doing a wonderful job keeping it in character and realistic. I hate it when authors take everybody out of character and everything just seems so off and unrealistic, but you are fantastic so far!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I hope it all continues to be realistic ^-^

Title: Chapter 1 17 Dec 2009 5:00 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, so this is the only story of yours here that I haven't read yet. Y'know how you just get so caught up in so many stories and you really don't think you have room in your mind for even one more? Okay, maybe that's just me. ;-)

    Well, I finally gave in and started this one too. I'm glad I did.

    So far this story is very different than any other one I've read. You're doing a great job portraying the characters and the atmosphere they create. I wanted to puke when Harry was with Umbridge and when Snape was talking to Harry in the doorway of the Potions classroom, I felt this sense of... foreboding.

    Great work! I'm gonna go read the next chapter! :D

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you so much for reading them all, that’s so sweet! *muffins and points and harry hugs for you ^^* - and I definitely know what you mean, probably why I reread so many fics – there are just too many great writers out there ^^

    Thank you so much, that’s such a kind thing to say... *have more muffins* ^^

    Everything you said is just so kind and I’ve felt the same sort of thing when I’ve read a fic I really like so I’m feeling incredibly, giddily happy right now, thank you ^-^  I’m so glad I was able to make you feel so much and that you find this original, this fic became bigger than it was going to be because I couldn’t find many Umbridge fics (not that I like her, she just never quite finds her comeuppance and I’d love to throw her uppance in her face... and I know that makes absolutely no sense but oh well ^^)

    Thanks and happy reading ^^

Title: Chapter 1 14 Dec 2009 2:54 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm very intrigued by this story. How is he going to manage a week of detention with Snape if he's simultaneously doing a week of "Rehab" with Umbitch? (Guess I'll find out in a sec, you're way ahead of me)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I’m glad my fic caught your interest, hope it continues to ^-^ Happy reading ^^

Title: Chapter 1 12 Nov 2009 8:24 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't quite know what to say. Excellent writing, BTW, nothing to criticise there, but the subject matter is very depressing. even when he is being well behaved, he is going to be punished.

    As this is a Snape/Harry story, I hope the torture doesn't go on too long before there is some light at the end of the tunnel. Though I know you warned us that the ride will be rocky.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Hmm, depressing is probably being kind but yeah Harry's not gonna be having fun for a bit.

    Oh, there's always light at the end of the tunnel!  It's just, um, a bit small right now...

    Hehehe rocky, another wonderfully misleading word... yes, the ride will be rocky, a bit.  (and this week is a tad warm too ^^)

    Thanks for continuing to read despite it though, hope you wont be too... umm, traumatised, by the end ^-^

Title: Chapter 1 14 Oct 2009 10:09 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start. I'm really intrigued to where you're going with this. It seems like it promises to be dark, and I love dark, angsty fics.

    Umbridge is creeping me out even more than usual. *shudders* Poor Harry. I hope she doesn't do anything too horrible to him.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! ^^ well, if you like dark and angsty then hopefully you’ll like the following detentions... I’m still a little worried about the reactions I’ll get for where I’m going with it but it’s been my vision for the story from the start so I think I’ll just have to stay true to the story (it’s so hard! ^^)

    Sorry, this will sound bad but that’s awesome, I’m so glad you’re creeped out by Umbridge, means I’m succeeding ^^  umm... how horrible would it be if she got very slightly inventive one more time?

    Thanks for reading btw, I’m massively in awe of Alea Iacta Est and am very flattered that you like my fic when o know how talented you are, I review every chapter I read on ff but I can do it here too if you like ^^

    Have fun x

Title: Chapter 1 14 Oct 2009 8:20 am
Reviewer: Minnie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very well done.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you ^^, unfortunately the reassurance is necessary but luckily for me I have at least one very kind reviewer ^-^,

    have fun x

Title: Chapter 1 19 Sep 2009 1:54 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, this first chapter was stunning in its impact. Very impressive.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! ^^

    Have fun x

Title: Chapter 1 18 Sep 2009 2:27 am
Reviewer: LJD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love, love LOVE this story so far. For some sick reason i love angsty stories that torture harry, which is quite awful lol. This is fabulously written and very chilling. Your umbridge gives me goosebumps! Thanks for posting this great story and I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much! ^^

    hehe and dont worry, you're not alone at all in that ^^ glad my Umbridge causes such a strong reaction... I think ^^, I am getting a lot of requests to really let her have it later on so I must be doing a good job of making her hate-able ^^

    thanks ^^

    have fun x


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