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Title: Chapter 6 21 Jul 2022 1:18 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I really hope that Snape will splat that odious toad. Harry’s forbearance knows no bounds..
Title: Chapter 6 04 Dec 2010 8:38 pm
Reviewer: Katherine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I. HATE. Cats.
Title: Chapter 6 17 Dec 2009 6:34 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah... augh. Ouch? Harry's tough, I gotta give him that. Perhaps too tough for his own good. I could not have taken that.

    A Snape plushie... now that I would like...

    Author's Response:

    I think you said it perfectly then, he’s far too tough for his own good.  Silly Harry *hugs him anyway* - I doubt anyone could have taken that... Harry should be a superhero ^^

    I think the Snape plushies were necessary... you know, for people’s mental health ^^

Title: Chapter 6 14 Dec 2009 3:55 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    I am traumatized, but it wasn't too violent, if that makes any sense. And yes, as horrible as it sounds, I am a fan of cats.

    Author's Response:

    Ah, not to worry, heaps of people still seem to like cats coming out of that chapter – after all, it isn’t a cat’s fault Umbitch is so twisted.  And I’m glad it wasn’t too bad... even if it was... and wasn’t... ^-^

Title: Chapter 6 12 Nov 2009 12:53 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    I forgot. What was the potion? I was expecting it to have done something before the end of the chapter. perhaops it did and I am too thick to figure out what it did. Perhaps increased the pain? Perhaps made Harry incapable of telling anyone about his adventures in Umbridges office, he he becomes so inclined. Or perhaps it will ensure that Harry does get an infection... a very bad infection. Anyway, instead of continuing to ponder, I might find the answers if I start on the next chapter.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    No no, not at all, you're one of the most intelligent reviewers I've had the pleasure of meeting... in a sense ^^ - no, the potion is a little extra something... hmm, how to explain... it's sort of like the little toffee chocolate things in a box of Roses - you forget about it because the other ones sound so much nicer but then you finally get to it and yum - if yum for you means an extra fact of torture... probably not but then I suppose you never know ^^

    I do so love reading your ideas as you think them, especially when you're so perceptive ^^  You sort of came close but not quite... you'll see... eventually.  I do so like to torture readers as much as Harry dont I?  Well, not as much... believe me I'm not like a real life Umbridge!  *shudders*  I like to think I have much better dress sense ^^

    Keep up the pondering, you're really very good at it ^-^ and it's very enjoyable to read ^^

Title: Chapter 6 12 Nov 2009 12:46 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    yes, I am definitely traumatised. You wrote the violence beautifully, if you can call such barbarity beautiful. I am just so, so filled with hate for this woman, I cannot think of a sufficiently descriptive adjective to describe my loathing.

    Harry's back is going to become infected, isn't it? and no, I do not loathe cats, just some cat owners.

    Are you going to make Harry's ruminations regarding Dd true, I wonder? are you one of those people who is going to make DD as bad as Harry's other protagonists. I hope not. I hate DD bashing.

    Author's Response:

    Oops.  Sorry.  But thank you for the lovely way you said that.  It may have been violent but it was beautiful violence ^-^ (I think that's a good thing... or maybe it's a complete oxymoron for anyone not into S&M... not that I am!  Oh, this is coming out horribly isnt it?)  But that really is nice to hear for me, that you hate her so much now that you cant put words to it ^^ Means I'm reaching my goal, I want every reader to feel the same by the end of this... sort of the point isnt it ^^

    And well done again!  But then, that was perhaps more obvious than other things you've uncovered, Harry's isnt exactly in his right mind enough to be mindful of his back and keeping it clean is he?  Oh well, he'll learn TT

    Very glad you dont loathe cats.  Cats are cute.  Cat owners can... well... not be.  ^^

    DD... hmm, well assuming you mean Dumbledore then no, he wont be in any way evil in this... just a little distracted.  But then if you mean Dudley Dursley (hahaha) well, you never know, he could really be voldemort in disguise!   dum dum dum.  XD

Title: Chapter 6 23 Oct 2009 9:30 pm
Reviewer: Sleeping Soundly (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is brilliant! I love it!
    Don't get me wrong, though - I absolutely loathe what Umbridge is doing to Harry, and I'm petrified as to what could happen next, but you've written it so perfectly and have really explored the possible pschological effects on Harry that could have been brought on from various aspects of his life that it's a beauty to read. Thanks for writing this!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much ^^ 

    And I'm glad you loathe Umbridge - if you liked her I'd be doing something wrong ^^ - and that you're petrified of what will happen next - although I'm sorry you feel petrified.  I hope you like the next few chapters, they're going to be just as... umm, interesting ^^, and I love that you're reading it as being so deep and psychological, it's what I'm aiming for so thanks! ^^

    stay safe and have fun ^^ x

Title: Chapter 6 15 Oct 2009 9:30 pm
Reviewer: LJD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hooo boy! That is sooo like Umbridge. What a .. fjdsfhdjsg. I think it was the right amount of violence.. and i can't wait til Snape finds out >:)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much, its so reassuring to read reviews like yours, thanks for making me feel I can trust where I’m taking this ^^

    And I cant wait ‘til I can write Snape’s reaction ^-^

    Have fun x

     
Title: Chapter 6 15 Oct 2009 4:00 pm
Reviewer: Ty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is great! I love the way you write Harry and Snape it is fantastic! Is it my imagination or did this story say something about self-harm warning? If so I was wondering when that may come in ( not that I want self-harm it is just out of curiosity) if it didn't then please excuse my randomness and lack of reading skills! Please keep up the awesome work!
    Ty

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! And yes, there will be self-harm in this fic, although it will come a little later, Snape will be a little kinder first, though there may be some borderline stuff beforehand – and don’t worry, I know what you mean – it’s a little odd when there’s no aspect of something that was in the summary ^^

    Thanks ^^, hope you continue to like it ^^ have fun x

Title: Chapter 6 15 Oct 2009 8:11 am
Reviewer: GraveDigger_Resurrection (Signed) [Report This]
    This is crazy-intense, and I want more. Umbridge has always been my favorite villain. Voldemort is a first class bad-ass of course, but there's something so *vile* about the mundane, insidious existence of Umbridge that almost makes her worse. I can't wait to see what happens, and for someone to figure it out and help Harry. Especially if that someone is Snape...

    Eagerly awaiting an update! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  And you picked the perfect word for Umbridge = insidious ^^, she’ll definitely worm her way in to Harry’s insecurities (and some trouble for herself as well eventually ^^) and yes... it will be Snape ^^

    Thanks ^^ have fun x


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