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Title: Chapter 8 10 Nov 2009 5:44 pm
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story!

    I can hardly wait to see what Madame Pomfrey is going to say once she sees Harry. Also wondering about that potion that the evil witch made Harry drink at his first detention.

    Hope your assignments go well!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I do like that Madam Pomfrey can usually shed a new light on things and it’s excellent that you haven’t forgotten Umbridge’s potion yet, keep it in the back of your mind for a little longer and the questions that arise soon will be answered (sorry, for some reason I’m sounding like a horoscope – to that end, you will have a wonderful day filled with thank you muffins *throws muffins at... ahem, to you* ^^)

    and thanks, I hope my assignments go well to XD

    have fun x

Title: Chapter 8 10 Nov 2009 9:17 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, you updated. I've been waiting to see it pop up into the update box. :)

    I liked this chapter. I know it's not very action filled, so it can be somewhat taxing to write, but it had a good chunk of character development that's necessary for a good story to progress. I seriously can't wait for the next chapter as I'm anxious to see what Pomfrey will find.

    Yay, Snape for picking up on how bad Harry is feeling and sending him to the Hospital Wing. I didn't expect your Snape to suddenly be nice to Harry so how you approached it worked well. We see Sev warming up the tiniest, tiniest, almost didn't see it bit, yet he still gets to stay his snarky self for a little longer.

    Ugh Umbridge is so evil. I hate her, and I hate the fact she loves pink because she tainted my favorite color. I hope Pomfrey or someone picks up what she's doing to Harry soon so he doesn't have to face any more sessions with her.

    I totally understand needing to get assignments done and the whole forced writing kills creativity thing. I don't really have papers to write, but I need to take my GRE (a test to get into grad school) in the next few weeks, so I've been studying for that. Basically it involves memorizing words you'll never use again and then be able to pick its antonym and know how to use it in a sentence. Basically, it has nothing to do with aptitude, which supposedly it's suppose to tell how well one will do in grad school, and everything to do with how much you study for the stupid test. Blah.

    You totally did better in terms of POV this chapter. *applauds* It was really smooth and like a big improvement over the last chapter, so kudos to you.

    I just want to say again that I'm so happy I got something to read tonight. I've been working on my prompt fest fic, which actually turned into a missing babyfic! moment for AIE, and while I have the idea completely in my head, my concentration has been zilch lately.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much ^^ I always look forward to your reviews for the insight you put into them, it's so rare for people to comb through any piece of writing and it helps so much *throws muffins at... ahem, to you ^^)

    I know my updates are sporadic and it isnt about to change, it's wonderful that there are people who understand (with other fics I've had people threaten me with oreo-murder for taking too long, luckily no death threats here ^^).  Your test sounds more than a little ridiculous (and hard TT) good luck for it, by comparison I'm rather lucky (my assignments are all writing centering around a short story and an article ^^ at least mine are semi-fun ^^)  I think you're the type of person who does well with what they want to do though and if it's something you want I dont think you'll have any problems.  Hope it's over and done with soon ^^ and besides, you're a fantastic writer, surely finding antonyms and definitions arent too much for you?

    Heh, this one was very taxing to write, possibly because of all the character development (it's amazing how exact that has to be so as not to cause inconsistencies later on, so much editing TT) I'm glad I'm managing to keep you intrigued, hopefully you'll like the next one enough to want to read chapter 10, that one will end nicely (well, my idea of nicely, which is really quite shocking a slightly gruesome... sorta... it will be worth reading anyway ^^)

    Do you honestly think Snape's development is believable then?  He can be so stubbornly hard to write TT (he's making me suffer ^^) - I think he's playing it lowkey right now, he doesnt necessarily like Harry (who knows what goes on in his head ^^) but it's still his job to make sure he's not about to pop his clogs you know?  I really hope I dont stuff him up though *bites nails anxiously* ^^ (and "I didnt expect Snape to suddenly be nice to Harry..." hehe, I live to surprise ^^)

    I love the fact that you hate Umbridge ^^ (you'll hate her even more soon, if thats possible ^^)  - and I feel bad that she's tainted your favourite colour but just think, the colour she likes isnt really pink, it's like a disgusting, umbridgey colour that's purely her, not pink.  there's nothing wrong with a bit of pink. ^^  And apologies in advance.  Harry's not done with Umbridge yet TT - just think AIE, Umbridge is Harry's cancer... although his is gonna be gone a lot sooner than your Harry's... sort of... ^^

    and thanks!  I'm so glad my POV improved, I hope I dont ruin it next chapter (I've noticed in rereading next chapter that I have a huge amount of jumping to correct - not literally, though jumping is fun ^^ - and I may fail monumentally but I'll try to avoid it ^^) *exchanges your kudos for muffins* thanks for the kudos! ^^

    And very glad I could provide you with something to read when you needed it ^^  Cant wait to read your missing babyfic moment and I hope something helps the concentration problem, I've been having similar probs lately so I know how irritating it is.

    Good luck with everything and I hope life calms down and reorganises itself soon, you sound like you need the break (or some insanely cute fics to read to cheer you up more ^^)

    have fun and thanks ^^ x 

     


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