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Title: Chapter 9 21 Jul 2022 1:37 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Muffins do sound good, though I wish Harry would eat one as well.
Title: Chapter 9 17 Dec 2009 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like how you write Madam Pomfrey. She is stern and caring and very mothering too.

    I wonder though if some of Harry's illness is coming from maybe his back getting infected? Or maybe that nasty potion Umbridge had him drink. I forgot about that. Evil woman.

    Gonna go read ch. 10!

    Author's Response:

    I’m so glad you like my Pomfrey!  I had so many people saying she was useless because she didn’t notice his hurts but really, can we blame her for not instantly stripping him down to his skin to inspect him?  And I was going for mothering but stern, thanks so much, you’ve made me so very smiley ^^

    And nice bit of pondering there too... Umbridge is evil and any potion forced down your throat by her is not going to be the best thing for you (I could always end up making it a vitamin supplement though... you never know do you? ^^)

Title: Chapter 9 26 Nov 2009 1:19 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I'm sorry I missed this chapter Sproutchild.

    Poor Harry. I really hope that someone other than Hermione and Ron, an adult, takes notice of Harry's problems with Umbridge.

    What with Sirius? I hope Snapey plushie can help!
    Great chappie as usual. On to the next! :)

    Author's Response:

    Oh not at all, thank you for reviewing!  ^^ (no matter how much I love some fics out there I sometimes miss chapters and it always makes for more fun the next time they’re updated because you get to read twice as much... but then you do miss an update in between... hmm, glass half full or half empty huh ^^ (fanfic philosophy XD)

    I think you’ll like my next update then, although Ron and Hermione... mostly Ron for some reason ^^ - is doing an admirable job of being supportive ^-^ *pats Ron on the head* good boy.  But Snape’s starting to feel left out so he’ll get off his ass ^^

    Haha, I seriously doubt Sirius would cuddle up to a Snapey plushy (maybe when no one’s watching ^^... who can resist Sevvy ^^) – but I’m sure Harry will like his Snapey plushy to help him heal from the stuff silly Siri said ^^

    Thanks – as always I love your reviews ^^ have fun and happy reading ^^

Title: Chapter 9 19 Nov 2009 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for a great story wonderfully evil Umbridge but no OOC at all. I hope Severus gets on side soon well quite soon but as for Dumbledore! I loathe the man and you seem to be setting up a bit of Dumbledore and Sirius bashing and I will be cheering all the way! Thank you again

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I’m trying to get Umbridge to stay as canon as possible but she may go a bit above and beyond next chapter, I hope you think she’s still canon then ^^  Oh Sev’s on side, and he’ll reveal that more and more as we go too ^^ and as for Sirius and Dumbles, well, they’re only human... neither are the most well-balanced and even though I’m trying not to bash them too much it’s hard; they’re both so bashable sometimes ^^  Sirius wont be huge in this fic but he will be around here and there and Dumbles is Dumbles, always watching but never seeing (or doing).

    Thanks so much for reading, hope you continue to like it ^^

Title: Chapter 9 19 Nov 2009 5:18 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh...I am so frustrated! Even Pomfrey has missed this! Pomfrey!!! Ack! So, Chapter 10 is going to be climactic, eh? I hope you aren't inferring that it will be a cliffie--you have no idea how the suspense of this story is killing me. I really need someone to find out soon; *P.G. is bouncing in her seat with anticipation!*

    Please update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I apologise muchly, especially considering the way chapter 10 will end (I’ll have chapter 11 up as soon as I can so you don’t spontaneously combust ^^)   And Poppy’s a very busy woman unfortunately but there will be a next time where she can redeem herself.  Ooh, that looks like fun *bounces in my seat beside you* I know this is a slow moving fic, I always write every moment as intensely as possible whether I mean  to or not and I know it can make reading it hard so thank you so much for bearing with me ^^ *cookies and muffins to you!*

    Have fun x

Title: Chapter 9 19 Nov 2009 1:55 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, but way too short!!!

    I don't mean to complain because I really do like this story and want very badly to see where you are going with it. Sirius deserves whatever you can dish out.

    Author's Response: Heh, sorry (believe me, I wish RL would disappear and let me write a couple thousand words a day ^^).  And as for Sirius, well, it wont be what I can dish out (or even I suspect what Harry can dish out in the end) but I bet Ron and Hermione (and maybe even Sev) will have some things to say ^^
Title: Chapter 9 18 Nov 2009 10:16 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't imagine that Poppy wouldn't do an actual physical examination, especially after her scan coming up inconclusive. However, what if there's something about what the Umb***h did that casts a spell on whoever is checking Harry over so they won't look for anything?

    The letter to Severus and the interplay between Ron and Hermione was perfectly in character. The whole chapter was very well written and I want ot know what happens next. Bravissimi!

    Author's Response:

    Ooh, that’s an interesting thought isn’t it?  I love all the ideas I’m getting about what that potion is and how it’s effecting Harry and people around him and yours is fascinating ^^  *zips lips* unfortunately we’ll have to wait ‘til Poppy uncovers it... or Sev... or Filch... haha no, don’t worry ^^

    Thanks!  I’ll try to keep them in character as much as possible (and keep you interested in what could happen next ^^) and thanks so much!  I’ve never had a bravissimi before ^^

Title: Chapter 9 18 Nov 2009 8:38 pm
Reviewer: xam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this story, and am happy to see that you are updating frequently, I look forward to reading more!
    :D

    Author's Response: Thanks!  And with all the cliffies and mystery I think I’d be facing death threats if I left updating too long ^^  thanks so much x
Title: Chapter 9 18 Nov 2009 6:40 pm
Reviewer: LaileeJane (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't wait to read what happens next, you are doing a fantastic job. Eagerly anticipating those detentions!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Heh, yeah those detentions are just so full of fun huh, at least they’ll be eventful though ^-^

    Have fun x

Title: Chapter 9 18 Nov 2009 6:19 pm
Reviewer: Sleeping Soundly (Signed) [Report This]
    Was Harry's bad reaction to the pepper-up perhaps to do with that mysterious potion Umbridge gave him? I forgot about it for a bit but I remembered it this chapter ... I guess we'll find out the true effects of it sometime soon?
    This chapter was good - but I definitely want at least someone to get vicious at Sirius - I'd love to be able to do that for some of my friends' parents but I never seem to have the confidence to do so ... plus, I'm pretty sure I'd offend them, which wouldn't be good ... :D
    Thanks for updating - you're really quick!

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, it’ll be Poppy and/or Sev who will find that potion very shortly, and I won’t say yes or no until then but nice guessing!  Ten points for that one!

    And some vicious consequences for Sirius?  Okey dokey (I seem to have a lot of people thinking he deserves it which I couldn’t agree with more – it seems a little ridiculous that no one had anything to say about it in the books but there we go ^^) – you have friends whose parents deserve some consequences too?  Hmm, it probably would get you in a bit of trouble if you did what I think Ron’s close to doing to Sirius but you must be a very loyal friend to want to, it’s a hard situation but in Harry’s case I think it would help him more to have loyal friends by his side than angry ones too busy berating Sirius to notice anything (in this fic he seems to have both though, lucky boy ^^)

    Thanks so much, I’ll try to keep updates quick, especially with chapter 11 (after 10 you might want another quick one ^^)

    Have fun x


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