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Reviews For Antonomasia
Thanks for the quick update...Harry needs help...it's killing me...I mean Harry! Author's Response: Ahh, calming potions may soothe the spirit (and Snape will be Harry’s calming potion ^-^) but will it cause more harm than good? (dum dum dummmmm... not that that was a hint ^^) Aww, don’t mean to kill you... or Harry... don’t worry, just hold out a little longer... you can do it! ^^ And it’s written down so all your points will go to your esteemed house my cunning green friend ^^ have fun and hope you like where this will go so very soon ^^
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah sorry about that... kinda ^^ (it does build suspense quite nicely ^^). Aww, sorry about that too, I know Snape hasn’t been overly perceptive but he’s better than those around him and really, it’s just rotten timing in then end... it’s almost like it was planned that way... shock horror! ^^ - I think he was distracted enough that he did what he could (which wasn’t a lot because he was worried about oncoming wrath and a pain in the a...rm ^^). He will be the one to... well, ‘find’ Harry out though ^^ Thanks for reading ^^
Really well done! Author's Response: Wow, Thank you! Hope you continue to enjoy it ^-^
I like how the plot's speeding up, and this chapter was rather interesting. It might just be me, but it seems that the writing gets a little more 'confused' (not as detailed or clear) whenever Harry feels worse. I might be reading too much into it though. I like your Snape, I feel he is in character and acting the way Snape would. I'm a bit confused as to how many detentions Harry was supposed to have with Umbridge and Snape and not entirely sure about the timeline. Where are we in the school year and how much time has passed from the first chapter? Anyways, sorry for rambling. I love it and you do a great job! Author's Response: Hehe thank YOU for reading and reviewing ^-^, it is about time I got to the nicer parts isn’t it ^^ And I’m glad you did pick it up, I tried to make the writing reflect his state of mind and I think I’ve done it a few times over past chapters too. I think the plots lends itself to that and it would be harder not to in the end. Hehe everytime someone says my Snape is still in character it lightens my heart, I’m always worried I’ll suddenly write something to the effect of ‘and then Sevvy danced into the Great Hall’ and not realise I’ve done it ^^ High strung characters make me nervous because you can’t just let the writing get away from you, you know? So thank you!!! *hands you muffin and a point or two* ^^ And I do seem to have explored everything in so much detail (prattled on ^^) to the extent that you’re probably not the only one who doesn’t know the day in this fic anymore ^-^ - at the end of chapter 12 we’re on Wednesday night and both Snape and Umbridge gave him detentions for a week... that won’t be so important by next chapter because it all unravels then ^^ as for the school year, it’s before Christmas but long enough after getting back to school that Harry knows all about the blood quill... beyond that I suppose I just got lazy but I’ll have to fix that soon too ^-^ And I love rambling (can you tell? ^-^) feel free to leave lots of rambling reviews in future, and thanks ^-^
Great chapter! -P.G. Author's Response: I’d agree that it’s about time people took notice but I wrote it and that would make me look a little thick... nevertheless, it is about time huh ^^ and I wont say one way or the other, you’ll just have to read the next chapter to find out ^^ Ah Draco, well he is a little unpredictable so we’ll see when it comes down to it if he decides to write himself in or not ^^ either way, I hope you like the next part, and thanks so much ^-^
I hope that Umbridge's treatment of him comes out soon! Poor Harry can't handle much more. The bitch needs to pay. Great work, can't wait for more. Author's Response: Hehe, well I’m sure that would be his first reaction if he or Harry was in any shape for it but no, Sev won’t be overly pissed. Not with Harry ^^ (mysterious? Or am I just being irritating? ^^) And don’t worry, next chapter it all unravels... well, it starts to anyway ^^ Harry is unbelievably resilient isn’t he? But he is starting to crack... and the bitch will pay ^^ I should puff her up and stuff her like a cane toad ^^ Thanks so much, and hope you have a great Christmas ^^ |
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