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Reviews For Antonomasia
:D Author's Response: Thank you! umm.... can all be forgiven again? *bribes you with new chapter... and cookies... and umm... muffins and... sugar...*
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Hmm, where to start? How about I'm so glad you finally updated. Yeah, I know, I'm one to talk... I've just been dying for reading material lately and can't seem to find anything good. I'm happy to hear you're enjoying uni. I can't wait until my semester is over! One and a half weeks left of classes, and then finals! I just totally need a break. Plus, my best friend is graduating from nursing school, so I'll be flying up to see her for a week, and I can't wait. So finally to the story. I loved, loved the first scene. The sensory details are really good, and I felt sucked into Harry's subconscious... how he was feeling, the warmth of being carried, etc. Loved it! It reminded me of the warm, calm feeling you have when you're drifting in between sleep and awareness in the morning that you want to stay in and return to every morning, if only it wasn't for that stupid alarm clock. ;) I loved Severus in this chapter. His transformation to being so protective of Harry is great. I wanted to scream out Finally! lol. I've been waiting for the comfort part of the story to start, as I'm sure you know and now I can't wait to see the rest of it, especially when Harry wakes and realizes that gentle, safe feeling came from Severus holding him! But, poor Sev and Poppy for having to discover the treat Harry. His injuries and physical state sound horrible. I can't even imagine how his mental state will be when Harry wakes up and faces what has happened. I'm looking forward to the angst of a mentally tortured Harry, and Severus helping him recover. I know you won't wave a wand and make it all better like well magic. It'll take a lot of time for Harry to recover mentally and physically, and I'm sure it won't be without its hiccups. *Hugs Harry gently* I also can't wait for Severus to confront Umbridge and face his wrath. She totally deserves it, and I hope Severus really gives it to her. Hmm favorite moment... Slytherin looks like it needs the points. Do I get an extra points boost since you stole my question... just kidding ;) I'd have to say it's at the very end of this chapter. Yeah, I know Harry's unconscious, but the fact that Severus carried Harry to the Hospital Wing instead of the spell shows just how much has changed between them since the beginning of the story. It's such a subtle gesture that speaks so much and makes me smile. As for AIE, writing isn't going so well at the moment. I have a gazillion ideas, it's the getting them down part that's giving me trouble, not to mention the lack of sleep, lack of days off, etc. I hope to get a new chapter up soon. Awesome chapter, and I hope you'll find the time as well to update again soon. This story is one of my favs and I hope everyday to see it pop up in the recent box. :) Author's Response: Hi! Omg, first I have to say I’m loving AIE despite my shameful lack of reviews lately (I copy and read it when I can and when I’m finished a chapter I’m not on the internet... which is probably for the best really since I’m sure I’d be leaving you ridiculously long reviews about how much I’m in love with your Sev and Harry and how I just wanna pull them out of your fic (so very very carefully) and hide them under my bed (which would have to be sterilised for Harry’s sake) and pull them out for cuddles whenever I want cos theyre so gorgeous!!! You’re just awesome ^^ Oh, and you so don’t compare with how crappy an updater of fanfics I am, at least you get to it every month *shakes head in shame* uni is really not an excuse, Harry is far more important... sometimes *sighs* I just get my priorities wrong *shakes head* I know, I know, I’m ashamed of myself too. But I’m on holidays right now so writing, here I come! (wow, that was quick) – anyway, back to reality, hope you’ve found something good to read? And how awesome for your friend! Hope visiting her was fun ^^ Yay! That was exactly what I had in mind when I was writing that bit – that wonderful feeling that you treasure on days off when you’re still half asleep in the mornings and you know you can just roll over and sink back into it if you like... *sighs* heaven ^^. So glad you liked it ^^ *sighs in relief* I was really worried I was going too fast with Sev’s caring, affectionate side coming out – felt a bit like it was a case of ‘mean Sev, cruel Sev, sneering Sev, oh look, he’s cuddling him’ – given that you ‘wanted to scream out Finally!’ I’m guessing you don’t think I moved too fast with that one then? ^^ and eventually I’m sure Harry will realise that... but you know me, I’m an absolute bit- nasty person ^^ - Harry’s going to take a little while to find his feet, mentally, you know? (wow, the way I wrote that I’d be surprised if you do know what I mean... that sounded really dumb ^^ hehe mental feet. Yeah, I’m getting tired ^^) Hahaha. No, that’s one thing you cant say about this fic; nothing will be fast or easy, including the recovery ^^ - but it has a hell of a lot more comfort to it so hopefully it wont be too horrible to read...? *hands over Harry for you to hug as the urge rises* ^^ And the Severus/Umbridge confrontation will happen in stages, the first of which was fun to write so will hopefully be enough for now ^^ Hehe, of course!!! *adds three points to your already HUGE personal amount* - don’t you just love awarding odd numbers and watching the interesting way it affects the tally? Or am I really odd (well, more odd ^^). Yay! I’m starting to like particular moment more and more too ^^ Good pick ^^ (*adds ****load of points to your amount* - you know it’s a tight competition right now too, it wont take much to tip the scales.... ooh, so much fun to watch... ooh I need a hobby... oh right, fanfiction... *rolls eyes* ^^ told you I was tired) Well I think AIE fans will be happy to wait for as long as it takes (despite holding our breath the entire time) so I wouldn’t worry too much if I was you... anything you write at anytime tends to be wonderfully, crazily, awesome. Oh, pop! (I’m providing sound effects for the update thingy to appear in your inbox... not weird at all right?) – pop pop! Ping! Moo! (moo?) Have fun (I’m gonna stop while I’m ahead... which I totally am ^^ x
-cursivewriting Author's Response: Oh, you;re very very welcome, thank you for the gorgeous review ^^ (I’m very pink and giggly now, thanks ^^) – hope you continue liking it ^^
Author's Response: Not long ^^ although if you take into account how long it’s taken me to update...
You're not stupid, hon. I actually took a look at the banner and I think it might be a size issue. You should email Jan or OE and ask how large the banners should be. I think it might not be working because yours is really large and it might not fit there. It's a very nice looking banner though; would it be possible to get the artist to shrink it down? Anyway, I look forward to reading more. -P.G. Author's Response: Thank you!! I’m just hoping Sev’s affection isn’t blooming too fast ^^ (I think we’re already firmly in the realm of OOC but it would be good if it was somewhat believable still... you don’t think I’ve moved too fast? *bites lip nervously*). Oh thank you!!! *hugs you in delirious joy, blueberry muffin-level joy (I’m positively squeeful ^^) – I hadn’t even thought of its size until you suggested (and after a few years of my high school photography teacher telling us over and over that email doesn’t support massive images that really does make me indescribably stupid ^^ ) – and to think I can do that really quick-like too... Thank you!!! I’m going to put so many points (and muffins and cookies and other wonderfully sweet things) to your house!!! (Ravenclaw... oh, now I just feel selfish *hands over points and wonderfully sweet things directly to you*... otherwise I’d get some and that’s just silly... *hugs you too* thank you!!! you’ve made my day!) Hope you like the next chapter... we’ve seen caring Snape, I figured it was time for him to let a little of his anger out. (and only on the right person of course ^^) - thanks!!
Great chapter! Glad to see you are back!! Author's Response: Oh, there will be more than one but I’m sure I can make each satisfactorily explosive (as you’d expect from the two of them) – she’ll more than likely come out burnt... if at all ^^ (I’m led to believe a lot of readers would welcome that outcome ^^) – and Sev can do wonders, you just watch... or read... you know ^^ Thanks!!! (and hope I didn’t keep you waiting too long TT)
Please update again as soon as you can. Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!!! Snarky Potions Master care is certainly coming up, hope you enjoy it ^^ Thanks!!
Well, I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter! Author's Response: I know! There’s so much this fic is practically bursting at the seams! Oh the humanity! And Sev can fix anything (even if it takes him awhile) thank god for patience and thanks!!! – oh, which house would you like ur points in by the way?
Author's Response: Thank you! hope you like the next one ^^. |
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