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Reviews For Antonomasia
I can't say there is something I love more, I found this chapter perfect! But I ROTFL-ed for the door on Dobby face it was the right moment to add something able to make you smile since the 'darkness' of this chapter. And I love Harry's reaction at being carried. Poor sweet boy! I wonder if the DADA teacher will survive to the mediwitch fury!!! Am I mean if I want to see that Toad cry? (can she go to AZKABAN!!!!) Author's Response: Aw thank you! I’m thrilled that you’re liking this fic so much ^^ it was rather a dark chapter and unfortunately (for Dobby) it was easy to insert some house-elf-bashing to lighten it up, glad it worked! And Umbridge shouldn’t only be afraid of Pomfrey... although she is the one to... well, you’ll see ^^ Oooh, Umbridge crying, what a lovely thought... let me think on it (her punishment should be appropriately fitting ^^).
Author's Response: Thanks! Umbridge will certainly rot somewhere ^^ Healthy-Harry coming soon... eventually ^^
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ and don’t worry, Umbridge will get more than just a telling off... I think her evilness (and insanity) will become obvious rather soon and I cant imagine any of the profs standing by and letting it pass, can you? More Sev-caring coming up ^^ thanks!!
Regardless of the conundrum, I loved the chapter, even though Harry was unconscious throughout (except for his semi-conscious musings at the beginning). Severus' seething anger and thoughts of retribution are a wonderful precussor to chapters that I am sure will contain all the fluff and angst your readership can absorb. Lesley~ Author's Response: Hehe, I find that enjoying the torture is actually a nice thing for a reader since it means they hold out hope that he'll get help and healing afterward... see, we're really optimistists with his best intentions at heart if you think about it... really, really hard ^^ - 'cept those who read them just to imagine him being tortured... cruel, cruel peoples... not like us... ^^ Heh, poor JK's Harry, he's been ethosized... totally a word... or a bizarre new form of working out... he's just so easy to pick on (and I am not whining... I'm noooot) (far too much sugar... sorry ^^) - and I think we prefer a weak Harry because he's so much more realistic (not that there's anything unrealistic about a 17 year old defeating a mass murderer with a wand... it's just as realistic as a population believing he was born to after all ^^) - and come on, who doesnt love Save-'em Sev ^-^ (ooh, he could totally be a superhero! ^^) Thank you ^^ I'm thrilled you're still interested enough to keep reading (both the fic and this reply ^-^) - an unconscious Harry is infinitely easier to write... though somehow more angsty... go figure... And that's the best way I've heard it put so far; I'm going to be packing as much Sev (seething, fluffy, angstful (angstful?), cuddly and all) into the rest of this fic as I can... realistically ^-^ Thanks so much *have points and muffins!* |
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