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Title: Discovery 24 Dec 2009 12:36 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry--he's so overwhelmed. I hope Pomfrey figures out the truth.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Well, we'll see wont we? Glad you liked the chapter, TftR.
Title: Discovery 21 Dec 2009 8:57 pm
Reviewer: bookslug (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please carry on! This is great!

    Author's Response: Indubitibly.
Title: Discovery 02 Dec 2009 11:06 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the last time as it helps you without going back to the last chapter. Thank you for the story it is great

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story, hope you like the next chapter. TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 5:31 pm
Reviewer: DottyLizard (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think that the answer must be in moderation, like all good things. I'd have to say ease back, certainly, but you don't have to stop using it.

    So he lost his eye when he was six and the teacher went to his relatives about how he was treated? So it's utterly a fake eye, rather than a wounded and healed eye? No wonder he's worried aboout people finding out...

    I just hope that Madam Pomfrey isn't too overbearing :)

    Author's Response: You know how Pomfrey is....yeesh, but I wouldn't want to be in Harry's shoes right now. He'll be lucky if he's allowed to attend class the next day. But I'm glad you like the chapter, TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 6:34 am
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    the last time technique seems fine to me. only a paragraph's worth and it helps us readers recall what happened last.

    Oh nice chapter. Wonder about Harry's situation. Hope you update soon. dont leave us hanging for long.

    Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can. So far I've got more yes or ambivalent then complete no answers. I shall update accordingly. Glad you like the chapter, TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 5:31 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    i really like this story. i do wish the chapters were a little longer. but you have to follow your muse. i always go to the last chapter before the update and read the last paragraph, so for me the 'last chapter' at the start of the update is not needed.

    Author's Response: Hmm, so you don't care either way. You'd like longer chapters, but it doesn't mean I have to give up the technique if I don't want to. I'm glad your liking the story, hope you'll like the next chapter, TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 4:07 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    i like the last time technique it means i dont have to go back a chapter to read the last part, i get so busy i sometimes forget which story it is i've last read the short last time reminds me where it has left off as well as i can quickly get my brain to remember which story it is. so i vote for it.

    just reading this chapter made me feel really anxious lol i think harry's feelings are rubbing off! :D

    Author's Response: *falls over laughing* Harry doesn't mean to do that, but he can't help it. I guess it is one of his talents. Hmm, so the vote is being decided very shortly. TftR, glad you liked the chapter.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 3:49 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait till Severus sees what was done to Harry. I think there will be some very petrified students and one very dead Vernon Dursley. Great job! You can leave the Last Time technique in there if it helps you focus.

    Author's Response: *nods* How do you like your Vernon, original or extra crispy? I'm glad you don't care one way or another. It helps to know that there are people who are neutral about it. I'm sorry I haven't read your stories lately, but I've been busy with school and getting these chapters up. TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 3:46 am
Reviewer: Ebily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! Another great chapter! Can't wait for more!

    As for the 'last time' thing... I don't really look at it at all because you update so frequently (yay!) that I can usually still remember what happened last time. So I would say it's unnecessary but not bad or annoying or anything. Except maybe in deceiving me as to how long your chapter *really* is...

    Author's Response: *snickers* That's true. I will try to make longer chapters. But it's hard to be creative when you're on a time limit (self-imposed or otherwise). I'm glad you like the story, TftR, hope you'll like the next one.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 1:56 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more

    Author's Response:

    Heh, okay. You won't have to wait for long. I'll update soon. Glad you like and TftR.


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