Well, a bit longer than normal, so that's good. I'm glad the "last time" was shorter too, you really don't need it, because it was taking up a LOT of your space. I liked the chapter but it could be better, we know Severus knows something off, but what does he notice from chapters back?
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait. I like keeping things in the dark about how a character views things. Anyway, glad you liked the chapter. TftR.
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