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Reviews For More Than Meets the Eye
Author's Response: I'm glad, and a Merry Christmas to you too. TftR.
Very-very-light blond hair does not equal silver. It sort of equals white. (Or white-blond, even.) This annoys me to no end. Picturing Little Draco with Silver Hair gives me this impression of him as like, a really tiny grandfather or something. And and and if you would make a new paragraph every time someone speaks that would make me happy. Yeppers. But otherwise I quite like this story, although I didn't think I would at first, because I was like "why are there more than two words in the title" or something. I'm sure I had a very good reason. ANYHOW yeah. And and and you bribed me to review. So here goes. I HAVE MADE MY PRESENCE KNOWN. -ehem- anyhow. I shall now duck under the covers again now. Author's Response: Meh, I've heard other authors use silver. And she didn't mention in the book. Speaking doesn't always have to be in a new paragraph, and it makes it more wordy then nessaccary. Still, TftR.
Author's Response: Be just a bit patient, and be glad that I've updated at all! But I'm glad you like the story, TftR.
Author's Response: We'll see. I'm glad you like the chapter, and I hope you're looking foward to the next one when I finally update. TftR.
I will be patient and wait for the end of the christmas break (when it is? I ask only because it could be different from where I live...), but it will never be too soon! this was another amazing chapter! Author's Response: *falls over in amazment* Wow! Now that is what I call a review. Anyway, I cant answer all of your questions. But I will answer the part about the Hospital Wing. I said spend the night, not an indefinite stay. He does have to get back to classes y'know. Uhm, christmas break ends January 4th for me. I think Vernon would deserve it more then the students though. TftR, I'm glad you liked the chapter so much. |
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