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Reviews For More Than Meets the Eye
Very-very-light blond hair does not equal silver. It sort of equals white. (Or white-blond, even.) This annoys me to no end. Picturing Little Draco with Silver Hair gives me this impression of him as like, a really tiny grandfather or something. And and and if you would make a new paragraph every time someone speaks that would make me happy. Yeppers. But otherwise I quite like this story, although I didn't think I would at first, because I was like "why are there more than two words in the title" or something. I'm sure I had a very good reason. ANYHOW yeah. And and and you bribed me to review. So here goes. I HAVE MADE MY PRESENCE KNOWN. -ehem- anyhow. I shall now duck under the covers again now. Author's Response: Meh, I've heard other authors use silver. And she didn't mention in the book. Speaking doesn't always have to be in a new paragraph, and it makes it more wordy then nessaccary. Still, TftR.
Author's Response: Be just a bit patient, and be glad that I've updated at all! But I'm glad you like the story, TftR.
Author's Response: We'll see. I'm glad you like the chapter, and I hope you're looking foward to the next one when I finally update. TftR.
I will be patient and wait for the end of the christmas break (when it is? I ask only because it could be different from where I live...), but it will never be too soon! this was another amazing chapter! Author's Response: *falls over in amazment* Wow! Now that is what I call a review. Anyway, I cant answer all of your questions. But I will answer the part about the Hospital Wing. I said spend the night, not an indefinite stay. He does have to get back to classes y'know. Uhm, christmas break ends January 4th for me. I think Vernon would deserve it more then the students though. TftR, I'm glad you liked the chapter so much.
Author's Response: Indubitibly.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story, hope you like the next chapter. TftR.
So he lost his eye when he was six and the teacher went to his relatives about how he was treated? So it's utterly a fake eye, rather than a wounded and healed eye? No wonder he's worried aboout people finding out... I just hope that Madam Pomfrey isn't too overbearing :) Author's Response: You know how Pomfrey is....yeesh, but I wouldn't want to be in Harry's shoes right now. He'll be lucky if he's allowed to attend class the next day. But I'm glad you like the chapter, TftR.
Oh nice chapter. Wonder about Harry's situation. Hope you update soon. dont leave us hanging for long. Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can. So far I've got more yes or ambivalent then complete no answers. I shall update accordingly. Glad you like the chapter, TftR.
Author's Response: Hmm, so you don't care either way. You'd like longer chapters, but it doesn't mean I have to give up the technique if I don't want to. I'm glad your liking the story, hope you'll like the next chapter, TftR.
just reading this chapter made me feel really anxious lol i think harry's feelings are rubbing off! :D Author's Response: *falls over laughing* Harry doesn't mean to do that, but he can't help it. I guess it is one of his talents. Hmm, so the vote is being decided very shortly. TftR, glad you liked the chapter. |
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