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Title: Pomfrey's Visit 24 Dec 2009 6:45 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay. So.

    Very-very-light blond hair does not equal silver. It sort of equals white. (Or white-blond, even.) This annoys me to no end. Picturing Little Draco with Silver Hair gives me this impression of him as like, a really tiny grandfather or something.

    And and and if you would make a new paragraph every time someone speaks that would make me happy. Yeppers.

    But otherwise I quite like this story, although I didn't think I would at first, because I was like "why are there more than two words in the title" or something. I'm sure I had a very good reason. ANYHOW yeah. And and and you bribed me to review. So here goes. I HAVE MADE MY PRESENCE KNOWN. -ehem- anyhow. I shall now duck under the covers again now.

    Author's Response: Meh, I've heard other authors use silver. And she didn't mention in the book. Speaking doesn't always have to be in a new paragraph, and it makes it more wordy then nessaccary. Still, TftR.
Title: Pomfrey's Visit 24 Dec 2009 2:08 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, poor, poor, poor, poor, poor Harry! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Be just a bit patient, and be glad that I've updated at all! But I'm glad you like the story, TftR.
Title: Pomfrey's Visit 23 Dec 2009 9:35 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter again! I'm glad that Harry is getting the help he needs, just hope that Severus and Pomfrey can reassure him that he's safe now, as well.

    Author's Response: We'll see. I'm glad you like the chapter, and I hope you're looking foward to the next one when I finally update. TftR.
Title: Pomfrey's Visit 23 Dec 2009 6:55 pm
Reviewer: SSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that you decided to keep the tally, even though I said it didn't really matter.... but I waited so long for this chapter that it saved me from going back to the last one... even if it didn't actually take you so long to update, it seemed that way, cause I was so curious about what was going to happen! is harry staying in the hospital wing for a long time? has Poppy discovered every one of his problem, even the fake eye and the problem whith his voice? I can imagine severus face when Poppy questioned the children, it must have been hard for draco not to laugh! I liked draco in this chapter, especially the way he comforted harry... I remember you said, answering a review I think, something about no one being concerned for the students that hurt harry... what will severus do? I am not concerned, not at all, because I am sure they deserved everything severus could do, and I mean everything. Though now severus will discover the truth about harry, and this is good...
    I will be patient and wait for the end of the christmas break (when it is? I ask only because it could be different from where I live...), but it will never be too soon!
    this was another amazing chapter!

    Author's Response: *falls over in amazment* Wow! Now that is what I call a review. Anyway, I cant answer all of your questions. But I will answer the part about the Hospital Wing. I said spend the night, not an indefinite stay. He does have to get back to classes y'know. Uhm, christmas break ends January 4th for me. I think Vernon would deserve it more then the students though. TftR, I'm glad you liked the chapter so much.
Title: Discovery 21 Dec 2009 8:57 pm
Reviewer: bookslug (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please carry on! This is great!

    Author's Response: Indubitibly.
Title: Discovery 02 Dec 2009 11:06 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the last time as it helps you without going back to the last chapter. Thank you for the story it is great

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story, hope you like the next chapter. TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 5:31 pm
Reviewer: DottyLizard (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think that the answer must be in moderation, like all good things. I'd have to say ease back, certainly, but you don't have to stop using it.

    So he lost his eye when he was six and the teacher went to his relatives about how he was treated? So it's utterly a fake eye, rather than a wounded and healed eye? No wonder he's worried aboout people finding out...

    I just hope that Madam Pomfrey isn't too overbearing :)

    Author's Response: You know how Pomfrey is....yeesh, but I wouldn't want to be in Harry's shoes right now. He'll be lucky if he's allowed to attend class the next day. But I'm glad you like the chapter, TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 6:34 am
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    the last time technique seems fine to me. only a paragraph's worth and it helps us readers recall what happened last.

    Oh nice chapter. Wonder about Harry's situation. Hope you update soon. dont leave us hanging for long.

    Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can. So far I've got more yes or ambivalent then complete no answers. I shall update accordingly. Glad you like the chapter, TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 5:31 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    i really like this story. i do wish the chapters were a little longer. but you have to follow your muse. i always go to the last chapter before the update and read the last paragraph, so for me the 'last chapter' at the start of the update is not needed.

    Author's Response: Hmm, so you don't care either way. You'd like longer chapters, but it doesn't mean I have to give up the technique if I don't want to. I'm glad your liking the story, hope you'll like the next chapter, TftR.
Title: Discovery 01 Dec 2009 4:07 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    i like the last time technique it means i dont have to go back a chapter to read the last part, i get so busy i sometimes forget which story it is i've last read the short last time reminds me where it has left off as well as i can quickly get my brain to remember which story it is. so i vote for it.

    just reading this chapter made me feel really anxious lol i think harry's feelings are rubbing off! :D

    Author's Response: *falls over laughing* Harry doesn't mean to do that, but he can't help it. I guess it is one of his talents. Hmm, so the vote is being decided very shortly. TftR, glad you liked the chapter.

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