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Title: The Alicorn 30 May 2010 11:32 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    OH I am glad to see another chapter i love this story I feel for harry. I love how snape is in this story

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. TftR.
Title: The Alicorn 29 May 2010 11:51 pm
Reviewer: Anon #64 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "for-hooves" should be FORE-hooves

    Also, a winged, telepathic unicorn? That is kinda over the top... hope this won't turn into one of those fics where an amazing magical beast introduced/invented by the author takes over the fic...

    hope Snape will take good care of half-frozen Harry...

    Author's Response: *taps foot impatiently* I understand critiques, but please be polite. And if you don't like that type of fic, I hope you know to stop reading before you start critisizing. Myself, I like different types of beasts, and Harry will need all the help he can get. And naturally Snape will take good care of Harry. (also, on the hoof note, or any other misspellings you see, note that if my spelling and grammar check doesn't catch it, neither do I.) Thanks for the Review, but please be a bit more patient with me, hmm? Thanks :)
Title: Danger comes in many forms 29 May 2010 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Anon #64 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "pursuing the catalogs"
    this should be PERUSING - "perusing the catalogs"

    Author's Response: Uhmm...actually it can be both. Especially as I meant it as persuing an aim etc. But yes, he was also reading the catalog. *shrug* I've never really seen the difference before now. I am hoping you like the chapters, and are not just pointing out mistakes I'm making :P.
Title: The Alicorn 29 May 2010 10:29 pm
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! Poor little Harry though! The stuff with the alicorn was interesting though. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked. Keep reading, and TftR.
Title: Danger comes in many forms 26 May 2010 4:23 pm
Reviewer: IchigoMirai (Signed) [Report This]
    this is still really good! wonder what'll happen next...

    Author's Response: Don't worry, it will be something good. Glad you like the story, TftR.
Title: Danger comes in many forms 26 May 2010 3:09 am
Reviewer: TangledPencils (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for updating, it always feels like ages in between, and then of course, no matter how long the chapter, it's always too short, lol.

    If a reviewer is that uptight that they curse and flame, without being constructive, one has to ask the question...why have they bothered to read if they think it's that bad? I've started reading stories in the past, they start off ok with the story line, but if the story fails to continue to hold my interest, or grammar etc is that bad, I just leave and don't continue it. Like most things, vote with your feet, and leave, don't blast the author, that won't help anything.

    Ok, having said all that, I'll get off my soapbox. I'm still reading and enjoying this story, even though I don't review each chapter. Please continue soon...and with longer chapters, hahaha! Cheers! :)

    Author's Response: *smiles slightly.* I agree with you. I have done the same, and I avoid flaming. Mostly I review to know when the next chapter will be up, heh. I am glad you like this story, and I don't mind if you don't review each chapter. TftR.
Title: Danger comes in many forms 26 May 2010 1:30 am
Reviewer: shinesodark (Anonymous) [Report This]
    As an author I think you have every right to put in author's notes. Good on you for taking your flamer to task!

    Btw, love this story and was hoping to see the basilisk again. Yay!

    Author's Response: *chuckles softly* Thanks for your encouraging words. I'm glad you are loving this story. TftR.
Title: Lecture and Quidditch 18 May 2010 2:10 am
Reviewer: bugeyedmonster2 (Signed) [Report This]
    "(P.S. Why the name BEM?)"

    It's just my RL initials, really. (B.E. Miller.) But since I'm a sci-fi fan, I like to use the association of BEM for a Bug Eyed Monster. lol. I'm weird that way.

    Author's Response: Oh...haha, you are clever ^.^ I'm a sci-fi fan as well, and I know about BEMs from various books (Piers Anthony primarily.) Thanks for responding to my PS :)
Title: Lecture and Quidditch 17 May 2010 4:04 am
Reviewer: IchigoMirai (Signed) [Report This]
    very good still!! wonder what'll happen next...

    Author's Response: Well you'll have to keep wondering a bit more. Lunar is next, then Runner before another update for this story. Glad you liked, TftR.
Title: Lecture and Quidditch 17 May 2010 3:05 am
Reviewer: bugeyedmonster2 (Signed) [Report This]
    Like Minerva and Snape's little scene at the end. I'm sure some part of Minerva still looks at Snape and remembers him as an ickle firstie. (Will Snape be in for some unwanted Mother Hen-ing from Minerva? That would be fun to read.)

    Author's Response: *snickers* Most likely he will, and will do all he can to avoid it! I'm glad you liked the little scene with those two, as well as the chapter. TftR. (P.S. Why the name BEM?)

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