Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Heart's Wish
Title: Chapter 4 11 Feb 2010 1:03 pm
Reviewer: PascaleP. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter, very well written and I really hope you will update soon. Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 4 10 Feb 2010 11:19 pm
Reviewer: Wolverine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nooooooooooo! Please don't stop this fic. It's one of my favorites.
Title: Chapter 4 10 Feb 2010 8:44 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I understand how difficult stories can sometimes be to write, but please don't give up. Take all the time you need and don't try to force it. You are doing just fine.

    I hope that Severus will do some careful questioning and discover that Harry isn't at all arrogant or spoiled. All he really wants is to be loved and wanted as Harry, not as the "Boy That Lived". I hope that Severus will find it in himself to see beyond Harry's resemblance to James Potter to see the innocent child that he is and change his perception to the correct one. Children should not pay for the sins of their parents.

    Great chapter!
Title: Chapter 4 10 Feb 2010 7:37 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Its only the first few chapters, but i like the relationship developing between sev and harry. Give harry and sev a chance to grow together. Great chapter.
Title: Chapter 4 10 Feb 2010 1:35 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, don't give up. We all have to start somewhere, and I think that you're doing a marvellous job!!
Title: Chapter 4 10 Feb 2010 1:22 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it xx
Title: Chapter 4 09 Feb 2010 11:29 pm
Reviewer: Snakesrcool (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope you dont give up, this has the makings of a great story.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the kind comment!
Title: Chapter 4 09 Feb 2010 10:46 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    perhaps snape should think about why harry's uncle would be in a nightmare? perhaps, delve more into the bond, if snape were to try to wake harry up during a nightmare, the bond could show the nightmare to snape.....just a few suggestions....i am enjoying the story

    Author's Response: Thank you for the great ideas! I hope something will click in my brain to keep the story rolling. Glad you enjoy the story :)
Title: Chapter 4 09 Feb 2010 10:14 pm
Reviewer: ina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    huh, evil Snape. I hope Dumbledore finds out about him hitting Harry and sacks him for it. No teacher should be allowed to abuse a student. Or maybe the bond itself punishes him for hurting Harry instead of nurturing him.

    Author's Response:

    Perhaps Severus did overreact but I think this is the starting point for him to fullfill Harry's emotional and physical needs ;)

Title: Chapter 4 09 Feb 2010 8:21 pm
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    you are doing a very good job-please continue even if you must take a break

    Author's Response: Thank you :)

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