| Title: Chapter 4
| 09 Feb 2010 8:20 pm
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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I think I know what you mean about not going together as there seems to be something missing. But that said I do think this is a worth while story. Your idea is interesting and I would like to see how you finish it. Are you going to talk about the Evaporatus spell more or was that a one shot? Will Sev contemplate more on the rune meaning now that the thought of Harry living in fear has been raised into his mind?
Author's Response: I had plan to bring the Evaporati back into the story and incorporate the spell but I just can't think of how to continue. Guess this is a of writer's block. I like your idea of Severus delving more into the rune meaning and will definitely be a good starting place for the next chapter. Thank you so much for the ideas and nice review!
| Title: Chapter 4
| 09 Feb 2010 7:55 pm
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| Reviewer: finley (Anonymous)
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I love this story, in fact had forgotten about it, so it was such a treat to see it again and updated!! Please update soon?
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment :)
Please don't stop writing! I love this story. You portray Harry and Snape wonderfully and I love fake deatheaters. Its a great and orginal idea.
Excellent chapter and please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind review :)
Great to see an update, I like the story idea because I havent really read anything that involved this kind of storyline with Harry and Severus being kind of spell bonded :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment!
Hi , thanks for that great chapter. Persons are very good in character, well done. I really enjoy to read this story and I look forward to the next update.
Thanks a lot and please update soon.
Marylou
| Title: Chapter 3
| 04 Oct 2009 10:45 am
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| Reviewer: PascaleP. (Anonymous)
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Super story, I like it! Thanks for sharing.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 04 Oct 2009 10:18 am
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| Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous)
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I just loved this chapter, you are a great writer. Please update soon I nearly can't wait for more
Oh poor Harry, Snape isn't the kindist man in the world. I love the story.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 03 Oct 2009 5:26 pm
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| Reviewer: kelsin79 (Anonymous)
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I'm so happy to see an update on this. I've been checking daily! Hopefully the next one won't take as long 'hint hint' ;)
| Title: Chapter 3
| 03 Oct 2009 12:34 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter can't wait for more
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