Ooh cool chapter im looking forward to see where you go with the story :)
That's a really interesting spell Harry cast and hopefully it will serve to bring the two closer together. If Severus gets hurt or is in pain, will Harry feel it? Or vice versa?
Author's Response: No, Harry will not feel any pain if Severus is hurt or vice versa if Harry is hurt. I believe the spell will work it's magic in time ;)
Well, I hope that Snape finds Harry soon. I'd be terrified if there were people hunting me in the forest. Just wondering, who told Harry about the Death eaters? If it's first year, he would need someone to tell him about them.
I always think of Hagrid as a big Old English sheepdog, he watches over the students like a sheepdog.
Author's Response: Hagrid whispers "Death Eaters!" when he's at the window, then tells the students to run so they know the figures are bad. The fact that first years don't know what Death Eaters are is something I overlooked.
Ooh, nice beginning. Very original.
Poor Harry though. What a shock for him.
i like it so far. cant wait till you update
| Title: Chapter 2
| 24 Sep 2009 9:14 am
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| Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous)
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Very good and interesting!
Hagrid as a dog? I don't know, yeah maybe a Newfoundland something like Fang.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 23 Sep 2009 6:47 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter I like were the story is going and can't wait for more
I liked it very much. Nearly can't wait for moore, please update as soon as you can, thanks
| Title: Chapter 2
| 23 Sep 2009 2:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Shana76 (Anonymous)
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Thank you for updating, I really loved it. Good chapie.
I agree with you , Hagrid would be a Newfoundland if he were a dog.
Please update soon
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