| Title: Chapter 1
| 18 Sep 2009 10:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Shana76 (Anonymous)
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Hello, I like your first chapie.
Well written. I like that part
'It was more of a punishment to him than the boy.' LOL!
I look forward to the next chapter.(Soon, please!)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thank you!
I loved it, and I hope to see an update soon! Great job!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 18 Sep 2009 9:38 pm
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| Reviewer: riasnape (Anonymous)
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Great writing! Looking forward to more and intrigued about the wish thingy???!!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 18 Sep 2009 8:50 pm
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| Reviewer: manon (Anonymous)
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Sounds good, please update ASAP can't wait for more.
Good job so far!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 18 Sep 2009 8:31 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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The story looks promising. I would love to read more. Can't wait for more
What a great first chapter! Very well done, I like it very much.
You let the persons well in character, thats super!
PLEASE update sooon!
I like it!
Looking forward to see where this is going. Don't be discouraged by the number of reviews...or lack thereof, it usually turns around. Hope to see an update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for the comments! Wasn't expecting it to go over quite as well since it's my first story.
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