i like that made dudley nice to harry
Title: Chapter 1
| 30 Sep 2013 7:54 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Just found this story seems a good start thank you
Well, that's sweet! Dudders is being nice! Will that continue- (I hope it does, Dudly is one of those characters that could possibly redeem himself if he noticed that there was a problem) Anyways, I'm going to charge ahead and read your story- it looks excellent!!!
Title: Chapter 1
| 14 Oct 2009 10:37 pm
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Reviewer: Supreme Commander (Anonymous)
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Really good! I haven't read any Harry Potter (I'm old enough to have a driver's licence), but from what I know, you've captured the feel. I'd give you a 10, but it would just go to your head. Keep writing!
Very sad begining, :( Hope little Harry will get someone to care for him...hinthint, lol. I can't wait for more!
Aw that was very sweet, and well written.
Welcome to P & S and I'm really looking forward to reading more from you.
So Dudley is good in this. I'm happy to see that, and I hope that Harry can get out of there as soon as possible.
On to the next chappie!
Author's Response: Thanks! ~shige
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