You really know how to paint those two as true villans--using your honorary nephew against his own father? evil. I actually feel sorry for Lucius!
An enjoyable, mulitfacited, chapter! Looking forward to your next update.
V.
You just had to do the cliffies, didn't ya? ;) I am enjoying this story, and can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck with school.
Title: Chapter 16
| 01 Nov 2009 2:30 pm
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Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter can't wait for more
I like this so far!! I like how you intertwine the different plot lines, and your portrayal of your characters. They don't all follow their canon personalities, but they are distinctive anyway, which is wayyy more important in my opinion. :0)
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