Lovely story! I can't wait to read more.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 18 Oct 2009 6:32 pm
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| Reviewer: helga1967 (Anonymous)
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Is really interesting the tale. Very good redaction and excelent development and plot.
| Title: Chapter 15
| 18 Oct 2009 12:10 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Love the chapter Harry is so cute can't wait for more
| Title: Chapter 1
| 14 Oct 2009 10:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Supreme Commander (Anonymous)
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Really good! I haven't read any Harry Potter (I'm old enough to have a driver's licence), but from what I know, you've captured the feel. I'd give you a 10, but it would just go to your head. Keep writing!
| Title: Chapter 14
| 12 Oct 2009 6:54 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter can't wait for more
Yeah Severus is keeping Harry. Where is Sirius has he escaped in his animagus form?
You had an 'oops' moment.
(The scene of Remus’s last hour in this cell.)
Sirius, not Remus.
Curious as to what happened to the old dog though.
Aw, I love Severus' thoughts on how foolish he'd been in the past. I think that his feelings towards Harry too, are very sweet considering how hard it must be for him to see the boy who is James Potter's son.
Nice work.
| Title: Chapter 13
| 11 Oct 2009 1:50 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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brilliant chapter can't wait for more
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