Title: From Dust to Death
| 23 Sep 2009 11:32 pm
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Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Great story! Poor Harry! Snape is soooo mean! I can't wait to read more!
Title: From Dust to Death
| 23 Sep 2009 11:00 pm
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Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Brilliant story poor Harry getting all those detentions hope Snape realises that he made a mistake
Very well written! I like that your characters are in canon, even Snape. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: From Dust to Death
| 23 Sep 2009 9:55 pm
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Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous)
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poor Harry, Snape is so cruel
Title: From Dust to Death
| 23 Sep 2009 9:50 pm
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Reviewer: Kagome-chan@o2.pl (Anonymous)
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Hey - Its me again xD I know that you wont try to mess it , but some authors just try to much and results of their works are "Mary Sues" - dont know if you call it different in english but in my language we call it that, but nvm tht, you could allso make snape "oh somebody hurt you ? im so sorry (kiss ) " xD Nah serioulsly, a following canon (and by that i mean character's personalities) to some point will make it good, and i liked that part , i will sure look forward to another one especially if it will be as long (or maybe longer) as that :d
PS : sorry i know that sometimes i write things that doesnt have too much sense - but well im not native english speaker, i try as hard as i can but sometimes grammar may be pain in the...
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