| Title: From Dust to Death
| 23 Sep 2009 9:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous)
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poor Harry, Snape is so cruel
| Title: From Dust to Death
| 23 Sep 2009 9:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Kagome-chan@o2.pl (Anonymous)
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Hey - Its me again xD
I know that you wont try to mess it , but some authors just try to much and results of their works are "Mary Sues" - dont know if you call it different in english but in my language we call it that, but nvm tht, you could allso make snape "oh somebody hurt you ? im so sorry (kiss ) " xD Nah serioulsly, a following canon (and by that i mean character's personalities) to some point will make it good, and i liked that part , i will sure look forward to another one especially if it will be as long (or maybe longer) as that :d
PS : sorry i know that sometimes i write things that doesnt have too much sense - but well im not native english speaker, i try as hard as i can but sometimes grammar may be pain in the...
| Title: A Shimmer of Hope
| 23 Sep 2009 9:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Kagome-chan@o2.pl (Anonymous)
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Its hard to say something about ff that had just begun, right now im really interested - i like those kind of stories ^^, i just hope you'll keep it i mean your work and it, with every next chapter, will be a better and better. Dont mess it up, pretty please - coz it could be really sweet and good story ;)
Good luck with that one :)
Author's Response: Thanks (I think). I'll never intentionally try to mess up a story though.
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