| Title: Together at last
| 24 Mar 2021 7:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good, I’m sure I’ve never read a story where Draco rescues Harry after first year.
| Title: Together at last
| 28 Sep 2009 12:35 am
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| Reviewer: Mortmagic (Anonymous)
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Really like this store line,keep up the good work.
Very original idea! I love Sev and Draco's relationship and can't wait till Harry joins in. Thanks for the story, I look forward to more.
| Title: Together at last
| 27 Sep 2009 11:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Love the story can't wait for an update Hope the next chapter is when they tell harry wonder how he reacts
Ooh, they reconciled before Lily's death. Nice. And even with an Unbreakable Vow to reenforce him looking out for her son(s). Nice element there.
Aw, Draco launching himself at Severus! Too cute! Ooh, and he caught the sleight of hand. Such a little Slytherin, Draco...clever bugger! And it's beyond cute that Severus calls him "dragon."
I liked Draco's reaction, it was pretty much Draco. It also almost showed a bit of concern for Harry when he suggested bringing some of the potion he was given for Harry.
You are doing a good job with making Draco not seem like a complete git! He has this very nice air of innocence about him in your story that is actually refreshing. Especially the little detail about him not handling apparating well.
Poor Draco, and poor Harry. The chat through the cat flap...Ugh! So sad. Love the wand floating up the stairs to Draco. *snort* And also how Draco is so convinced that Severus would obliviate the Dursleys. *giggle* Once that boy gets something in his head...
The eavesdropping conversation and explanation was moving and sad, and I am surprised that Severus would confess that already. Although, wait until Draco (and Harry) finds out that Severus's eavesdropping killed his mother and father. Not going to be a good conversation.
Like this! Keep going!
| Title: Together at last
| 27 Sep 2009 11:35 am
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| Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous)
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Good start. I like it so far. Snape seems a bit OOC.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. Snape will be a bit OOC in this series. It's my opinion that the Snape that everyone sees and the true Snape are two different people. Thanks for reading!
| Title: Together at last
| 27 Sep 2009 9:38 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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I love the twist of them being twins. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Post soon!
| Title: Together at last
| 27 Sep 2009 2:56 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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Great job and very interesting premise.
| Title: Together at last
| 26 Sep 2009 9:39 pm
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| Reviewer: kelsin79 (Anonymous)
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I really like this story so far. I hope you will continue to update daily (or at least often) :)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the first two chapters. This story (and its sequel) are already completely written, so I will probably add a new chapter every 2-3 days.
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