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Reviews For Frater Gemini
I wouldn't blame Harry for wondering where Madam Pomfrey was to heal him. Who in the student populace really knows that Snape can do healing? Certainly not Harry! Harry's quick-to-forgive attitude is so Harry. People say it's all Lily, but I disagree considering how she refused to forgive him for one word. The forgiveness is all Harry! Love how he forgave him so fast, after a quick rationalization. Although poor Harry has a lot to take in right now. Poor boy. HAHA! The image of Snape hauling Draco up over his shoulder is hilarious and adorable all at the same time! Ooh, that's interesting that Draco is supposed to have red hair! "Under protest," so funny. Pictured the little semi-traumatized Draco pouting over his confiscated wand. HAHA! "He used to play Beater on a professional Quidditch team." *chokes on tea* Did Draco make that up to scare Harry, or in your story, did Snape really do that!? *giggles* It would be a good way to let off some steam he surely had bottled up for YEARS! *keeps reading* Oh shucks! He didn't. That would have been a fun little secret hobby. Aww, permission for Harry to call him "Uncle Sev" like Draco. Adorable! Aww, Snape contributed to the photo album! AWESOME! Lily trying to do the magestic robes maneuver is so cute! Glad he got to get a candid shot like that of Lily for Harry (although not at the time for Harry...) I think it's so bittersweet how Snape is acting like a better parent than the guardians of both the boys. Such a paternal heart beating under that cold exterior...*sigh, Drinks tea* - RK
Though all of them are slightly out of character, it doesn't matter much to me. The story is sweet, warm and charming - so I only wish you could continue it sooner)
In my contry very popular are stories written on blogs. Most of them is complete useless, in several we can find lots of absurds and Mary-Sue is really common. I'm afraid you can do something like that. Show more emotions, your bohaters are dead, give them life
An original and interesting idea well executed. Keep up the good work!
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