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Title: Chapter 3 28 Oct 2014 7:31 pm
Reviewer: Post U Later (Signed) [Report This]
    Holy Shit! They're In The Prince Mannor Aren't They? Old & Dusty To Say The Least.

    & Poor Harry, Having Another Vision So Close To The Last One. But At Least Now Snape Knows What They're Like. Right? Maybe He'll Go Easy On Harry From Now On? Doubtful.

    & The House Cleaning As A Punishment? Pfft, Harry's Killer At Cleaning House. He's Almost Better Than A House Elf.... Though, That's Decidedly Not A Good Thing.
Title: Chapter 3 15 Dec 2013 3:31 am
Reviewer: Elizabeth Severine Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I like your writing style and would love to read more of this.
Title: Chapter 3 02 Jun 2011 2:53 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    OOOH PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Also please have Hermione and Harry get together please! They make such an awesome, super-couple!!
Title: Chapter 3 15 Oct 2009 2:05 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    This is very exciting. I can't wait to find out what happens to Harry. And I'd really like to see some more interaction between Hermione and Snape.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I should have an update within the week. There will be a bit of interaction between Hermione and Snape coming up...if not in the next chapter, in the following!
Title: Chapter 3 14 Oct 2009 12:09 am
Reviewer: maybell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think you're doing a good job of portraying Harry as emotionally all over the place. While Snape as yet appears to have few redeeming features, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the story. The good spelling and punctuation make it enjoyable to read.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying it! Give Snape some time, he'll come around.
Title: Chapter 3 13 Oct 2009 6:08 am
Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow -- I really like that you are giving your plot time to build. It is allowing for some character depth to develop that would be lacking if you hadn't taken your time.

    I hope that we will see a slight softening of Snape now that he has begun to understand what Harry has been facing.

    I also hope that Harry stops pushing his friends away (even out of altruism) because we all know he is strongest with them by his side.

    I look forward to seeing where you take this.

    Author's Response: Thank you! We will start to see Snape soften, but it's a process...he has had years to fuel the fury, so to speak, and it will take a few challenges before they are able to be amicable. I'm glad you're enjoying this so far, I hope you continue to do so!

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