*Claps* Thanks for sharing! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! If you like this one you might also like my Draco/Hermione Halloween story on ff.net called Trick or Treat Slytherin Style. It's about Hermione convincing Draco to take her trick or treating in a Muggle neighborhood.
Oh...a shark! Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! I just had to put one in there, no sea story is complete without our favorite predator.
| Title: Something Fishy
| 18 Oct 2009 3:25 pm
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| Reviewer: mina (Anonymous)
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great storyline, I can´t wait to see what happens when they find the kelpie. Only the shark part was a bit unrealistic. It is only a myth stemming from films such as jaws that sharks react to the blood of mammals. Severus is knowledgeable enough to know that they normally react only to fish which are their normal prey and imho would have told Harry that his fear is based on watching too much bad films at the Dursleys.
Author's Response: Well, that is true, but this one was hungry and it did attack Harry. Fear is also a great motivator for a hungry predator to attack. And Severus might not be so knowledgeable as you'd think because he never had the time to do real research on sharks and their habits, he's not a marine biologist. So he might know only basic facts and that's all. Thanks for reading and hope you like the rest of this.
I hate sharks!!! Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks and they are very scary.
Wow that was some fight! Great descriptions there and I loved all the spells they used. And the time change was brilliant! I never would have thought of that. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The time change was inspired by looking at my calendar and recalling soon it would be daylight savings time.
| Title: Something Fishy
| 18 Oct 2009 4:33 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Okay that was very scary! I'm really scared of sharks. Sev and Harry were brilliant! Hurry and write the next one.
Author's Response: Most people are. I couldn't go in the ocean for a long time after I watched jaws.
Brilliant, I was really scared! I love how they finally defeated the shark. Post the next one soon!
Author's Response: Okay I will try! Thanks as always!
| Title: Something Fishy
| 17 Oct 2009 9:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Min (Anonymous)
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I sort of feel sorry for the shark, not that I wanted it to get them or anything. I have a new respect for them after watching Shark Week so many times. LOL.
Author's Response: Yeah I know what you mean. They are to be respected and feared. Thanks for reading.
Oooh a scary mean ole shark! I would of been scared to death lol
Author's Response: You and me both1 I think I would have died! I like to look at sharks on TV and in aquariums but I'd never want to meet one.
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