| Title: If You Want to Breathe Water, You'll Need More Than Gillyweed
| 16 Oct 2009 1:43 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed)
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Ooh the image that last part leaves me with! I think I need a cold shower! I really hope that they find Katie soon! Loved the potion though!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks I needed that!
Poor Harry and Katie, poor Severus!. He's going to blow a gasket once he finds out the mistake in that potion!!!
Author's Response: yes he just might! And you can see how he reacts in the next chapter that I have posted.
| Title: If You Want to Breathe Water, You'll Need More Than Gillyweed
| 15 Oct 2009 4:28 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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*blush* I dunno bout that...Not really intrested in seeing a male without clothes. Though I would have liked to seen Sev in his mer form. Bet he would look good *smirk*. Great chap.
Author's Response: Yeah he would look good! And just wait till you see what happens next!
| Title: If You Want to Breathe Water, You'll Need More Than Gillyweed
| 15 Oct 2009 2:51 am
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| Reviewer: RaeKelly (Signed)
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Oh! Mermen! Very interesting and different! Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks Rae! I love to see Sev half naked, LOL!
| Title: If You Want to Breathe Water, You'll Need More Than Gillyweed
| 15 Oct 2009 2:31 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Ooh, that was great Snapegirl.
You had me a little flustered there, when you said that Severus took all of his clothes off, and I definitely needed a cold shower when you talked about his well-defined muscles.
Okay girl, calm down. Stop imagining tall, dark and silky drawl with his muscles rippling.
Author's Response: I knwo what you mean! That's a fantasy of mine, seeing Snape with his clothes off, which is why I keep writing about it.
I hope Snape is more worried than angry. Harry's going to be in big trouble for distracting Katie otherwise. I really liked the way you described the kelpie. I hope Harry's able to save his girlfriend. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Well, he is right now! I like mythological creatures and this water horse is one of my favorites. You'll learn more about him as the story goes on.
Erf....if they do get out of this mess, Sev is going to mighty irked at their slip-up. Great second chap.
Author's Response: Yes, he will be. No doubt about it.
Oh man! Now they've done it. Or rather the kelpie has. Come on Sev, get your butt in gear and help Harry rescue Katie before she becomes a mermaid forever. I love this series.
Author's Response: Thanks! Severus will be helping out, never fear. Now he and Harry can have an underwater adventure.
Wow that kelpie is something. Harry had better tell Sev everything and they had better go and rescue Katie as soon as possible.
Author's Response: Yeah he needs to tell Severus everything so Severus knows how to help him.
Oh no! They have to save her. I can't wait to see what happens. Hopefully Snape will be able to come up with something.
Author's Response: He'll be trying, believe me. But first he needs to know what went wrong with the potion.
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