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Title: Chapter 2 – The Visit 23 Sep 2015 12:49 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    I adore Tonks... Never, ever say a bad word in front of a child, because it will be the ONE word they hear out of a whole paragraph and proceed to never forget it and to repeat it in front of everyone... -sigh-

    --his
Title: Chapter 2 – The Visit 27 Oct 2009 10:51 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I am getting very curious about the party :) I hope this does not have four but fourty chapters. Mila

    Author's Response:

    No, it's only 4 chapters because it was a special sequel as a birthday present for a friend. Later there will come the real sequel to "A better childhood.

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 2 – The Visit 27 Oct 2009 8:59 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful. Sad and wonderful.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 2 – The Visit 27 Oct 2009 6:40 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    "What shall the Ministry lick, Uncle Al?"-LOL! Cute, yet bittersweet at the end. I'm enjoying this fic very much. I am rather astonished at how flirty the dialogue between Al and Tonks was, but I suppose they are probably close friends who could get away with that stuff because of their age difference and job.

    I hope little Sev can keep Al occupied in a different way during the party. No, it won't be the same, but he could always start a new tradition.

    I'm loving it--please update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I know the dialogs between Tonks and Alastor are close to become impropiate but I hope it is still okay. I hope the scenes between Alastor and Poppy make clear where his love lays,

    Oh, there will be enough things happen to occupy Alastor at the party. I will upload the next chapter in a few hours. 

    Sunny


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