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Title: Chapter 4 – Saying Goodbye 01 Nov 2009 8:23 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent! A wonderful little story.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm very glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 4 – Saying Goodbye 01 Nov 2009 5:58 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was cute. I love how he was holding little Sev at the end. I don't know why this story didn't get a good response; I thought it was very well-done. I especially liked the part where they were eating Fred and George's candies and Sev was running around with feathers. Great job!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm very glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 3 – The Party 30 Oct 2009 10:48 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really like this story, I am glad Harry is there, but I wish he could have his own childhood and forget his old one. Can't wait to read next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm very glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 3 – The Party 29 Oct 2009 10:50 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha, one can always count on the twins :)

    Author's Response: You are right! :) Thank you very much for your review! I'm very glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 2 – The Visit 27 Oct 2009 10:51 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I am getting very curious about the party :) I hope this does not have four but fourty chapters. Mila

    Author's Response:

    No, it's only 4 chapters because it was a special sequel as a birthday present for a friend. Later there will come the real sequel to "A better childhood.

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 1 – Five months later 27 Oct 2009 10:38 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    *grin*

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 2 – The Visit 27 Oct 2009 8:59 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful. Sad and wonderful.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 2 – The Visit 27 Oct 2009 6:40 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    "What shall the Ministry lick, Uncle Al?"-LOL! Cute, yet bittersweet at the end. I'm enjoying this fic very much. I am rather astonished at how flirty the dialogue between Al and Tonks was, but I suppose they are probably close friends who could get away with that stuff because of their age difference and job.

    I hope little Sev can keep Al occupied in a different way during the party. No, it won't be the same, but he could always start a new tradition.

    I'm loving it--please update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I know the dialogs between Tonks and Alastor are close to become impropiate but I hope it is still okay. I hope the scenes between Alastor and Poppy make clear where his love lays,

    Oh, there will be enough things happen to occupy Alastor at the party. I will upload the next chapter in a few hours. 

    Sunny

Title: Chapter 1 – Five months later 22 Oct 2009 1:20 pm
Reviewer: Sheila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So glad you wrote a sequel. Love it already!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 1 – Five months later 22 Oct 2009 4:46 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, nice! I'm so excited that you've come out with more (and uber excited about the up-and-coming story as well!). I'm very excited to see what Sev comes up with for his Alastor's birthday. My one criticism would be that the question "What do you wish for your birthday?" doesn't sound quite right. Now, I'm not an expert on British says, but in America, we usually ask "What do you want for your birthday?" I've never heard it the other way. It makes sense, but it doesn't flow as well, in my opinion.

    I can't wait for more though and was excited that you said this whole fic was already complete! I hope you post more soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    I'm gad you like it. It seems not many people are interested in it, but no worry I will upload it all one or two days.

    Thanks for mentioning my mistake. I will change it. I just translated the sentence word by word from German and that was the result.

    Thank you very much for your review! I think I would have been very sad if nobody would have commented on it!

    Sunny 


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