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Reviews For There Goes My Life
Title: Chapter 1 31 Oct 2009 12:30 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this and I've never read a song fic that I liked before. It was very touching to read about Harry and Luna's relationship. I'm glad it didn't end in divorce like too many teen pregnancies. I showed the story to my mum, since she was seventeen when I was born and she loved it. Awesome story!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to do something different and that song was stuck in my head and wouldn't go away till I wrote this.  I have some experience with this topic because of a friend of mine she was around 17 when she had her baby, her fiancee dumped her after she told him she was pregnant though.  It worked out though, because she met a really nice guy and is now married to him and her son is being raised as her husband's child and they have another one as well. Her former fiancee signed away his paternity rights so he has no claim on her son.  I just really love that song too and wanted to write Harry as a dad and this just fit.  Plus, I've learned that when my muse is nagging me to write something, I should listen to it.  
Title: Chapter 1 30 Oct 2009 5:56 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that was sooo good! I've never read anything like this and I really loved it! It's funny to imagine Harry as a dad, but you do it well. I laughed and I cried while I listened to the song. Awesome! Do another one, please!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Maybe I will!
Title: Chapter 1 29 Oct 2009 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It was quite a sweet story, but even though you put it up as AU there were still a few things that were a bit strange: All those children you mentioned that Rina is friends with seem to have parents that where in the same year as Harry. Does that indicate,that half his year got each other pregnant while still in school??? They must've been, because the kids all start Hogwarts together and must've been concieved the same year as Rina.
    Another thing: Becoming a parent doesn't mean that you have to give up all your plans - Harry could've gotten an education still, a lot of teenage parents manage, espesially those you get support from their parents. But that was your story and your ideas - nothing wrong with that...

    Author's Response: Rose was born a few months after Rina, Ron left school early to work with the twins in their joke shop and married Lavender, who also left school early. Blaise Zabini's daughter is a year younger than Rina, but still her playmate.  And Draco's Eva is another story, she was adopted, I just didn't mention all of that because I wanted the focus to remain on Harry and Rina. Harry did complete his schooling, he took tests so he wouldn't need to return for his seventh year.  And yes, he could have gone and become an Auror or played Quidditch after Rina was born, but both those careers would have involved lots of traveling and risk and he didn't want to leave his family and was content with being a journalist and spending time with his wife and daughter.  Like Severus said, "Plans change".
Title: Chapter 1 29 Oct 2009 6:11 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, love this song and loved this story. You really captured Harry as a young lost teenager and then trying to be a good parent. Rina was both a love and a heartache, like all kids! I think this would make a great new series.

    Author's Response: Aww thanks! I didn't consider it, but maybe I will.
Title: Chapter 1 29 Oct 2009 5:40 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful story! I love the little family you've created. It's very believable and that song is one of my all time favorites. Will there be more stories about Rina and Harry and the, hopefully, brother she'll have? Sev as a grandfather is pirceless.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! Maybe I will do a sequel or two later when I have more time. I like Sev as a grandpa too.

Title: Chapter 1 29 Oct 2009 9:06 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    So very bittersweet! It's hard to see your baby grow up and have to let them go; of course, it's also one of the greatest joys of life. Excellent little fic!

    Author's Response: Yes it is! Thanks so much for reading!
Title: Chapter 1 29 Oct 2009 8:09 am
Reviewer: natholius (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i really like this one. great song, and really good fic too. i almost think you could expand this story line, if you can think of good merges between them. keep up the great work!

    Author's Response: You're right, i could make a sequel or two, you're not the first one to suggest that.
Title: Chapter 1 29 Oct 2009 6:53 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    SQEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! This was SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SOOOOOOOOOOOOO adorable! SQUEAK! I like HP/LL, and it was really good here. :p I'm glad you wrote it!
    ~Fern Rose

    Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! This was the first time I've ever written that pairing and it was an experiment.
Title: Chapter 1 29 Oct 2009 5:45 am
Reviewer: nairobidawn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I thought it was great! I just love that song, and I thought it was completely wonderful!!! Poor Harry! I am glad he did the right thing, even if it was the hard thing. I think he will have his hands full with this next kid.

    Author's Response: I'd say you're right! I love that song too, it was one of my favorites and still is. Yeah it was hard, but look what he got out of it. 
Title: Chapter 1 29 Oct 2009 5:38 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    You just keep getting better and better!!! I loved this one-shot!!! It is so positive. I've read so many that weren't......thank you, you made my night!

    Author's Response: Aww, you're welcome! I try to keep them that way, because I've had too many negative things go on in RL lately. So I'm happy you liked it and am considering a sequel.

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